Solitary  

ShyWhisper2006 54F
8597 posts
8/23/2006 4:34 am
Solitary

White pristine wings
No markings
No soil
To hold others and caress the weary
To hold loved ones safe and from harm
Scorched now by another ones hatred
Tainted by the blood of her loved ones
Ripped from her back like so many other times
She gave and gave
Proved and convinced
That what she said was truthful
But the truth is drowned out
By the screaming of lies and hatred
The shouts of the jealousy
Scorned and ripped from the sky
Thrown to earth
To bathe in the acid of lies and deceit
Withered and scorched
Lying face down in the mire of another’s disdain
Not worthy of pity
Not worthy of love
Not worthy of the open skies
From which she came
Alone in the puddle of despair
Shy lays alone
As was meant to be
Foretold many ages ago
“Truth shall set you free”
If you are not one of her kind
One of pure love
One of joy
One of innocence from
Mankind's hatred
Fear her no more
She is silenced
Without a shout
Without a cry
Nary a whimper
Save a solitary tear
Which she sheds for all



rm_ShineOnU2 56M
125 posts
8/23/2006 2:35 pm

Hi there Shy,

Wow, that is both Beautiful and Horrific, Demonic and Angelic, all at the same time!? Tell me...who is she? It sounds fateful as well...why? (scratching his head)lol

Not exactly Hallmark's style but good enough to publish, I would think!

Yes a Big Ol' Happy Hug OOooff!


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 3:31 pm

spunky...Thank you *smiles*


rm_ShineOnU2 56M
125 posts
8/23/2006 4:10 pm

HI


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 4:48 pm

    Quoting rm_ShineOnU2:
    Hi there Shy,

    Wow, that is both Beautiful and Horrific, Demonic and Angelic, all at the same time!? Tell me...who is she? It sounds fateful as well...why? (scratching his head)lol

    Not exactly Hallmark's style but good enough to publish, I would think!

    Yes a Big Ol' Happy Hug OOooff!
BAH hallmark...somedays ...hallmark just does not cut it my dear...I am glad you liked it Shine...*walks away wondering why I flashed him..shakes head*


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 4:49 pm

*must control these....urges...where do they come from...why must i keep flashing...lil scowl from being all confused*


florallei 100F

8/23/2006 5:32 pm

At times Shy a man or woman feels like an island "solitary" no one in sight, no one to comfort her or him...as if laughed and mocked at...the loneliness...when it all comes down to it unless one can find a loyal and confidential friend...we are on our own!!!
Beautifully said if I grasped the essence of the poem...My interpretation of it anyhow...
TY for sharing.
luv,
flo


SirMounts 103M

8/23/2006 6:54 pm

shy...
Girl... You Must Publish!


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 6:59 pm

    Quoting florallei:
    At times Shy a man or woman feels like an island "solitary" no one in sight, no one to comfort her or him...as if laughed and mocked at...the loneliness...when it all comes down to it unless one can find a loyal and confidential friend...we are on our own!!!
    Beautifully said if I grasped the essence of the poem...My interpretation of it anyhow...
    TY for sharing.
    luv,
    flo
Flo...*smiles*..Insightful, wise and beautiful...and you my dear worry about bra size? *hugs you tightly*...You are awesome *smiles*


restlessenergy 53F
10 posts
3/15/2007 6:20 am

You know when you think about it though...that ONE tear cost more than a ocean full of fake ones by a soul that would eat any alive just for the sake of it. Save that tear.....mankind needs it.


ShyWhisper2006 replies on 3/15/2007 5:31 pm:
*smiles*...I agree restless...that is beautiful what you said..thank you *hugs*

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