Need a ride?  

ShyWhisper2006 54F
8597 posts
8/9/2006 8:00 am
Need a ride?

Lightening crashing in sounds surround and rain the size of quarters beat upon the windshield...he was standing by his car getting completely soaked to the skin.
The hood of his car was up and it was going nowhere anytime soon...I pulled over. I am not one to take risks but damn the guy was soaked. I am human and i feel for others , especially in a situation like this.
I pulled over and hollered through my window if he needed a ride. He nodded and climbed into the passenger seat. His somewhat long hair was dripping down his face and was plastered down in other places. I grabbed a sweater from the back seat and handed it to him and told him if he wanted to dry with it or just remove his top at least he be a lil warmer than he was.
He agreed and pulled off his t-shirt.
The car light up with the lightening as i finally took a good look at my passenger. He was early 30's and had hair past his shoulders...it looked like liquid ink on his now bare shoulders. He had a shy smile and smooth of chest...he looked at me with the greenest of eyes and thanked me.
Oh how I wanted to thank him, he was incredible looking and he was in MY car...*smiles*
Well , I asked where he would like to be dropped off at and he gave an address close to my neighborhood..wow so close and not even know it.
I tried not to look like i was stunned by this man and yet his presence stirred a desire within me. But being somewhat shy and not very forward I made small talk as i pulled out onto the drive to the address.
I can get carried away in chattering especially if nervous and he made me so very nervous in a good way...and not to mention a most aroused way. I kept my eyes on the road and listened to his warm dark voice and saw from the corner of my eye that he had turned in his seat to look my way.
I blushed as we stopped at a red light and looked at him and laughed nervously. He had asked if I had ever picked up a stranger before and I said oh no...not me...that would not be a smart move on my part. He laughed and said he was nothing to fear as he was as shy and nervous as I looked...we both laughed.
I cringed with each flash of lightening and he noticed , I am sure my knuckles turning white each time on the steering wheel.
He tried to make light of it and make me relax, but could see it wasn't working as the hail began.
It was then that i felt his hand on my thigh. I sear i almost turned to melted goo on the seat. It took me by surprise as a soft little moan escaped my lips. He asked if that would make me more nervous and I shyly said no. Oh my but it did. I could feel the warmth of his hand through m jeans and even the slight tremor in his touch as well.
In my head I begged him to move his hand higher. I so wanted to feel more of this man but damn fear and properness kept me from voicing what i wanted.
Goddess help me he moved it and he splayed his fingers as well covering more of my thigh and spreading the warm feeling from my thigh to the very core of me. His hand slid down my inner thigh and i almost hit the guardrail. I corrected the car and he giggled "Oops" and slid it further till it cupped my ever moistening mound.
I clenched my hands tighter on the steering wheel and he neared me and whispered along my neck..."Do you want me to stop?"
"Oh hell no " I whispered in response and he pressed his hand against me. I didn't know nor did i care if i made it home in one piece. The feeling was incredible and he knew exactly what measure of pressure to apply and where to get the maximum effect.
Pulling his hand out from under me slowly, he raised it slowly and stroked my cheek. He let his hand drop to my now gently heaving breast and i gasped aloud. My nipples had harden from his first touch and now they strained against the silk bra , wanting to be molested by this stranger.
His hands made quick work of reaching in to squeeze the tip between his thumb and forefinger. I was either going to begin to speed or get into an accident. Either way...it felt so good and i wanted more....


...to be continued....


PixieKittySC 62F  
1445 posts
8/9/2006 10:15 am

Shy... wow.....I'll sure be waiting to see how this one ends. *grins*

Pixie


florallei 100F

8/9/2006 1:13 pm

Hello Hun,

OMG you are a good writer...keep it coming Babe.
flo


Sailor376 64M
2288 posts
8/9/2006 4:28 pm

My jeans are getting a little tight.
lol
Dean


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/9/2006 7:03 pm

    Quoting PixieKittySC:
    Shy... wow.....I'll sure be waiting to see how this one ends. *grins*

    Pixie
Ahh pixie..is that an evil or a mischievious grin that I see gracing your face...*giggles*,...glad you liked it dear


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/9/2006 7:05 pm

    Quoting florallei:
    Hello Hun,

    OMG you are a good writer...keep it coming Babe.
    flo
*blushes* Flo ...it is so sweet of you to say...thank you my dear...I am glad that you enjoyed it...


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/9/2006 7:06 pm

    Quoting Sailor376:
    My jeans are getting a little tight.
    lol
    Dean
Oh my Sailor...did I do that...my apologies dear...*grins*
Thank you for visiting my blog...*goes to put a warning label on my writing*...


imaxtoy 34M
1289 posts
8/9/2006 8:39 pm

This is good, Whisper. I can't wait to see the rest of it.

imax, the toyed


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/10/2006 2:16 am

    Quoting imaxtoy:
    This is good, Whisper. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
thank you imaxtoy...


rm_pussnballs4u 63M/55F
326 posts
8/10/2006 2:34 am

Nice.....waiting for more.


ginsoakedboi 44M

8/10/2006 7:05 am

Thanks for sharing that Shy, is it just a two part installment or perhaps a mini series? Either way, I'll stay tuned!!!

Cheers


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/11/2006 6:44 pm

pussnballs....*smiles* thank you so very much...I am busy working on it...


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/11/2006 6:45 pm

    Quoting DustyWidget:
    I want it and I want it NOW!

    Love Dusty!
Hmm...anxious are we Dusty?.... If I remember correctly...please works in a pressing yet effective way


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/11/2006 6:49 pm

    Quoting ginsoakedboi:
    Thanks for sharing that Shy, is it just a two part installment or perhaps a mini series? Either way, I'll stay tuned!!!

    Cheers
ginsoakedboi...Welcome to my blog gin....Hmm you know that idea of a series is not one I thought of as of yet...perhaps it may be....and it shall continue as soon as I finish writing it...Thanks for stopping by


SirMounts 103M

8/12/2006 1:01 pm

shy...
Well, I might have to slightly modify My advice to all girls not to pick up strangers standing by the road. *winking*


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/12/2006 10:13 pm

*smiles*...Well Sir, it is not a good thing to do...at least most times...


rm_calgarym_43 55M

8/13/2006 7:49 am

WOW!! very nice story and great writing, I have to agree with Dean my jeans are getting a bit tight here as well...
Darcy


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/13/2006 10:04 am

    Quoting rm_calgarym_43:
    WOW!! very nice story and great writing, I have to agree with Dean my jeans are getting a bit tight here as well...
    Darcy
calgarym....*blushes* thank you ...your comment is much appreciated...and not sure if I should say sorry to being the cause of any discomfort...but I am...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/14/2006 9:02 pm

    Quoting spunky11961:
    I've read the second one first but this is great as well! You have a real way with words! Thanx!
    ~spunky
Thank you so much spunky...and your welcome *smiles*


BRONZEHALO 48M

8/16/2006 9:23 pm

This is off to an interesting start Dear Shy. About to read Pt 2 and see if the car makes it. lol Suspense. . .suspense. If you like, check out "sensual deprivation". My first attempt at this sort of thing. I'd like to hear an opinion from a fellow author. Keep it going. Have fun.
Tom

Bronzehalo 2007


ShyWhisper2006 54F
15175 posts
8/17/2006 5:07 pm

    Quoting BRONZEHALO:
    This is off to an interesting start Dear Shy. About to read Pt 2 and see if the car makes it. lol Suspense. . .suspense. If you like, check out "sensual deprivation". My first attempt at this sort of thing. I'd like to hear an opinion from a fellow author. Keep it going. Have fun.
    Tom
Bronzehalo...Welcome to my blog and thank you so much for your comment...I shall look forward to visiting and reading your works as well...Thanks for the invite *smiles*


elevenByseven 58M
88 posts
2/26/2008 8:53 am

"Almost hit the guardrail..." You have a talent, ShyWhisper, for putting the reader right in the story. I could see the car just missing the guardrail, from inside the car. Do I become him or am I just there watching? I'm not sure...

I have to go now, but be sure I'll be back to read more...


ShyWhisper2006 replies on 2/27/2008 3:12 am:
*smiles*..Thank you elevenByseven..I try to capture the images in my mind..I am glad you liked this..and your more than welcome to visit any time..

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