Here's A Little Something For You!!!!!..........Part I Chapter 1  

NaughtyKittyII 46F
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2/25/2005 8:18 am

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Here's A Little Something For You!!!!!..........Part I Chapter 1

This would be the opening excerpt from what I hope to be my "first" novel.

Give it a read....Give me some feedback....and maybe I'll "feed" you all a little more!!!

Chapter 1

Times Gone Past

It was as though the world was crashing down upon me. All of my sins had been found out, proof of whatever you do in secret will indeed one day be found out. I always expected this day would arrive. Though, what had nearly done me in was wondering when…when my indiscretions would be discovered.
“How could you do this to me?’”
“How could I do this to you? What about all that you’ve done to me?” What that shit doesn’t account for nothing?”
“I would have never done you like this though.”
“No…you’ve done much worse.”
“See, there you go always trying to turn things back around on me.”
“I’m not trying to turn anything on you. I accept full responsibility for my
actions but do you?
“You never really knew me.”
“I don’t know what I expected but I know it wasn’t to find out that you’d been fucking around with Alex.”
“Well, now you know!”
Storming from the room, trying to find anywhere to be besides here I began to
contemplate how our marriage had reached this boiling point. How could we have known that after nine years of our being together that it would end so abruptly and unexpectedly? We’d both believed that our marriage was one that would last forever, unlike our families who hadn’t expected it to last longer than the first year. However, we’d been deluding ourselves. And now here we were standing on the edge of the tumultuous mountain of unhappiness that we’d built, looking out over the shattered pieces of our marriage that now lie before us. We’d wanted things to be different but they hadn’t been nor would they ever be and now it was over.

Hope you enjoyed that little "taste"...and trust does get BETTER...MUCH BETTER!!!

Let me know what you think about it so far......

Kisses XOXO


SigEp4U 44M

2/25/2005 10:39 am

Hey are you writing my bibliography. Cause that sounds just like my life... hehe...

Sounds good... hope this is a piece of fiction and not based upon actual events in your life... if so...sorry.

keep writing and I will keep reading


payday5626 50M

2/25/2005 10:43 am

Hey thats pretty good. Do you have any experience writing? If not you may have just found a new career. Bye. Damon

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