Sunset Sequence  

MilleniaCinder3 29M
1 posts
8/5/2006 2:42 am

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8/6/2006 8:22 pm

Sunset Sequence


Amidst the purple pleathora,
I am taken aback
Ever so slightly by
The light, as it hits
Your body in such a way that
If I were a painter I'd have asked you to
Freeze
Until your perfection
Were so carefully recorded.

The indigo colors so
beautifully,
Your eyes, a mystery on their own
When you stare within me.

You are glowing(because of the sun?)
In such a way that I wonder whether I've died,
Or whether I was witnessing a vision.
Only to learn that your glow was
Present before the sun ever came along.

I am green with envy(or green with the grass)
To see those hips shine in light so
Soft, as to
Be ever-inviting.

And after it all, after the sun doth fall,
We are red, with burning passion,
A tribute to Ra, on our own.

DiscreetDelights 51F

8/5/2006 9:47 pm

Oh wow...just beautiful. Keep them coming. You're quite gifted. - DD


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