If I Had Known  

Elvira_Madigan 48F
4 posts
3/2/2006 11:30 am

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7/13/2006 12:30 pm

If I Had Known

My first attempt at a sonnet...what do you think?
If I had only known when first we met
That never again my eyes would see your face
No more my body feel your warm embrace
I may have acted differently and yet
Was it what happened on that day that set
Your mind to ponder those with greater grace
And leave me in my solitary space
Showing no remorse and no regret?

Or was it something else that made you flee
A fear of something real, of something strong
Two souls that blend as one…that live to be
The force expelling painful former wrongs
But now we’ll never know what could have been
And soul’s fulfillment shall remain a dream.


rm_sailorcouple 65M/63F
304 posts
3/3/2006 2:11 pm

I like it. The sonnet... such an old and romantic form of verse. You've done it well.
And thanks for visiting my new blog. I'm trying to become more creative. All you really good bloggers are an inspiration to me. I also like the quote in your profile...

sailor


rm_goddess1946 107F
13518 posts
3/3/2006 8:29 pm

I think you are on a roll! Welcome to Blogland!!

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


_CoffeeNoCream_ 53F

3/6/2006 12:11 am

lovely....

liefs C


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