The Sun ... A Standalone  

DustyWidget 60M
4382 posts
5/18/2006 4:44 am

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6/5/2006 10:47 am

The Sun ... A Standalone

It had been a very ordinary Friday night - meet up with your Friday buddy and trawl the Wine Bars looking for a laugh and get really drunk in the process.

A very ordinary Friday until ... he heard a colleague causing a commotion across the room.

He staggered over to him and saw a line of women sitting down all trying to ignore him.

'So can I have some of your wine then?' said his colleague.

One of them looked up and said 'No' and then turning looked him squarely in the eyes and said 'but you can'.

He looked into her eyes and his heart laughed. She was the one he had been seeking all this time.

First love - No

Last love - Yes

True love - Undoubtedly

Game Over

Quest Ended

Then as they looked into each other's eyes she laughed ...

And The Sun Rose


starlight_runner 40F

5/18/2006 12:00 pm

Thats kinda cryptic but poetic in its accuracy.

Kisses Star


derobed 60F
17 posts
5/18/2006 7:07 pm

Dusty, have you ever thought of auditioning for the part of the 'Professor' from 'Back to the Future'?


amoldenough 71F
16436 posts
5/28/2006 2:45 pm

Dusty--I loved the post. Very nice

"Don't cry because it's over; smile because it happened."


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