My first short story  

ClothesMyEyes 44F
81 posts
6/27/2006 2:22 pm

Last Read:
11/13/2006 7:10 pm

My first short story

She invited me back to her place.

We'd only just met, but the energy between us was intense. Dinner was an arduous task of not devouring her. Long auburn hair, a perfect pert mouth, those fathomless green eyes, almost like a cat's. I found myself lost in them all too often. Then her foot would slide up into my crotch, and break the spell.

We neared her apartment, my heart pounded loudly in my ears. This sexy woman was taking me home. As she unlocked her door, I slid my hands around her hips, and pulled her back, pressing my hardness against her. She gave a soft sigh and opened the door. Lifting her into my arms, I turned her around, put her back against the wall, kicked the door closed with my foot, and threw her legs over my shoulders.

Her lack of underwear almost made me explode, as I slipped my tongue under the fold of skin hiding her clit. The flawless ridges of her sex were silky soft. Her musky taste was so exquisite, that when she whispered "Fuck me" I had a hard time pulling away.

But now her need was my need. As she slid down my body, I unzipped my pants and was waiting for her to slide herself on me when she got there. The warmth of her entrance on my head was too much. I slammed her down onto me and pounded in and out of her. She screamed with pleasure, and rode me hard. Every time I hit her cervix she would shudder. Her beautiful face was flushed, and she panted "Fuck yes!" She came then. The squeezing of her passage around me sent me over the edge as well.

We lay against the wall panting, catching our breath for a few moments and then she led me into her house.

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Critique? Please be honest!


fortunaswm 63M/53F

6/28/2006 8:54 am

Congradulations - you had shared that you needed an avenue to express your desires in words - looks like you found it - AND you make me horny -
I also enjoyed camp sex and a gain - you made me fantasize about secrets I still hold. You can use your strap-on in my tent anytime.


ClothesMyEyes 44F

6/28/2006 5:52 pm

Thanks! I really enjoyed writing the story, and am so glad I found a place that I can post such things! As for strap on and tents... well, we can discuss that later.


SpreeFrothAcorn 47M
1 post
6/28/2006 5:58 pm

I liked it, moved a bit quick...... but for the narrative, instant spark-fire-combustion. I love the last line, the perfect cherry.
Also enjoyed your other posts, campping is a blast...
Not sure bout the strap-on bit, but who knows, maybe I'm just missing out lol.
looking forward to your next sexy story
Los


ClothesMyEyes 44F

6/28/2006 7:15 pm

I agree, it did move a bit quick. It's my first story, so I wanted to make it short and sweet. The sequel that I am planning will be a bit longer.

And I do think you are missing out with the strap on.


rm_atomatic3 34M
11 posts
8/13/2006 2:02 pm

It would make a good preface to a longer, more in depth story. Strap ons are underated.


rm_wheelstoo 73M
5 posts
9/6/2006 10:29 am

very nice,maybe a bit short,but this type of encounter is often quickly brought to a climax..enjoy the mention of the cervix,have found the contact is really galvanizing when my cock snaps into that perfect part


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