Grasp My hand  

BrightonCrazee 49M
5 posts
7/20/2006 2:20 am

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7/1/2008 6:30 pm

Grasp My hand


Grasp My Hand.

Grasp my hand…….let me show you a world
where friendship and yearning be together as one
never shy to speak with truth and passion from the heart
where one can bare their deepest and darkest secrets
unlocking the trove that has lain hidden
inhibiting the soul for so long

a place where lust may be unleashed
by the gentle caress of a finger
or the firm stroking of a hand
a confident, passionate, caring lover
ready to guide you through the darkness
to unleash the years of lost desire

a refuge of crumpled linen and steamy windows
broken light streaming through the shutters
throwing shadows upon the floor
an intricate dance of bodies entwined
an arched back as the hot rush of pleasure sweeps
engulfing your body

captivated by a sensual touch
let your legs envelope me tightly as arousal climaxes
leaving us breathless, wet and exhausted
pounding hearts like tympani drums sounding the finale
salty to the taste a kiss upon your breast
to send a final shudder through your body

And now the peaceful silence
as I gaze into your eyes
those eyes, so beautifully blue, Bermuda blue
mesmerising, casting their spell, stealing my soul
Grasp my hand, never to let go
Let our hearts surrender to one another

© May 2006 Brightoncrazee

keithcancook 61M
18125 posts
7/20/2006 3:09 am

Wonderful poetry here. I hope you find someone to take you up on this...

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BrightonCrazee 49M

7/20/2006 3:38 am

Thanks for the compliment Keith. As it happens I have found such a person, hence a change of eye colour from my original scripted poem.
Originally the last verse read,

those eyes, so beautifully dark, like bottomless pools
bewitching, casting their spell, stealing my soul

I figured that dark eyes bewitch and blue eyes mesmerise. Bermuda blue being reference to the myth of ships being lost forever in the Triangle because of some sort of superstitious nonsense. We know nowadays that it is more likely dur to the underwater geology of this area. A shame that some myths are ruined by science!


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