4-Eva...One Can Only Hope  

AtomicArtist0 46M
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1/19/2006 9:06 pm

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4-Eva...One Can Only Hope

In light of caressmewell’s writing competition, here is my third and final entry. This has been three pieces about demented love I like to call The Unholy Trinity. For this poem, it is best to imagine it read in a deadpan, monotone voice. Think Ben Stein and you’ll get the idea.

4-Eva…One Can Only Hope

Cindy B. luvs Billy D. 4-Eva
That’s what was carved on an old tree
in the woods behind the abandoned warehouse.
How long does 4-Eva last anyway?
Are they now Cynthia and William D., happily married?
Probably not.
When you’re young and stupid enough
To announce your unfortunate courtship
on the skins of trees and alabaster bathroom walls
4-eva could last a whole three weeks.
Maybe more. Maybe less.
Perhaps the courtship was over three days later
When Jeffery M. came strutting by
leaving her no choice but to go and make
her new and unintelligible mark on another tree.
4-Eva and Eva and Eva
Maybe the relationship ended when Billy D.
was caught making out and sharing cigarettes with Jody D.
Everyone knows Jody D. is one easy and hot ticket.
She even gave it to Mr. Denker in his office late at night.
Maybe Billy D. ended it when he found out Cindy B. was knocked up
Knocked up not by Billy D. but by- guess who-oh my god-Jeffery M.
Maybe Cindy B. has got syphilis.
Maybe Billy D. has taken up drugs.
Maybe Billy D. was caught by his mother
masturbating into a woolen and sticky sock.
Maybe he was then sent away to reform school
Where he can have at it with even more socks.
Maybe Cindy B. has taken too many sleeping pills.
Maybe she roasted her head in one of those salon hair dryers.
Maybe Billy D. spent most of his adult years still in high school.
Maybe he dropped out and Cindy B. went on to become…
…a tree surgeon.
Not likely. Not in my world.
Or maybe Cindy B. went to school one Monday morning
with a pantload of shit and never returned.
That’s more like it.
Maybe Billy D. drove himself off a cliff while masturbating into a sock.
One can only hope.

skyking412004 55M
5363 posts
1/20/2006 4:54 pm

____Personally I prefer Kleenex brand tissue over a sock. Choosy mothers choose Jiff comes to mind.(that was weird)

skyking412004 55M
5363 posts
1/20/2006 4:55 pm

____Personally I prefer Kleenex brand tissue over a sock. Choosy mothers choose Jiff comes to mind.(Where'd that come from?)

1023 posts
1/21/2006 5:58 am

Were you really that Jeffery M. ?

More fitting would be that you were cindy B's little brother.

I had a sock for everytime my mom caught me wankin' and never sent me to private school I'd be wankin six (no, I do that already) probably ten times a day. She was so understanding, she'd say after quickly opening the door, looking shocked and jumping back into the hall, and then closing the door, "Make sure you wash your hands before dinner." Then after her footsteps no longer echo down the hall, I'd get back to business. She made me go to the optomitrist for eye exams more often than the dentist. Now I wank while eating my dinner through a straw. laughs. This writing has made me ask, "What have we all become?" lol.

I figured out through this and your first writing for the contest, that you will from this day on remind me of some horror show host, like a human crypt keeper, a hipper narrator for the old style radio shows or something, but in the stories you watch and comment on, the horror show is our normal everyday lives.

*Of your three very good works, my favorite is dark desires, for the sexy insight which made it all seem so personal, and dirty hot!*

_____________Skyking, Kleenexes? really? do you have to use more than one? I couldn't imagine using anything less than a quicker picker up'er, but I always go into it with a mindset that I'm loaded for bear and the object of my desire is gonna know what I'm doing to her, no matter how many miles or centuries apart. Maybe I'm just a little different though.

AtomicArtist0 46M
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1/21/2006 7:08 pm

sil....thank you, sister...twisted is a compliment.

AtomicArtist0 46M
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1/21/2006 7:17 pm

tipadee...thank you for the compliment, but you have at many times already achieved a higher level of excellence than me. There are comments you've left on here that have left me speechless, and for once not knowing what smartass remark I can come back with. While I enjoy writing, from watching whats going on, I can already tell that I do not have this competition in the bag. Thats a guarantee.

AtomicArtist0 46M
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1/21/2006 7:22 pm

skyking...some folks use tissues, some folks use socks...I usually have to use a firehose to clean up.

AtomicArtist0 46M
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1/21/2006 7:34 pm

mzhoney...its always an honor when royalty comes to visit little ol' me. thank you for stopping by and for the compliments.

AtomicArtist0 46M
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1/21/2006 7:59 pm

viking...nah, I was never a Jerrery M. Chicks don't dump their boyfriends whenever I come strutting by.

wanking ten times a day? then going right back at it after you were caught? All I have to say to that is laundry day must have been hell at your house.

Its great what you said about the horror show being our own everyday lives. Its so true...and I'd be honored to be a hip host for an old style radio horror show. I think I have the voice for it.

Of the three, I think Dark Desires is my favorite as well. Instead of being a passive, distant observer, the writer (me) gets down and dirty raw and personal like. Most details on that one are real and tracable.

cuteNEway 42F

7/31/2006 2:55 pm

you knocked up Cindy B, didn't you?

AtomicArtist0 replies on 7/31/2006 7:41 pm:
no. you can't prove anything.

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