To Mother  

waggypolly 71F
7449 posts
1/21/2006 4:44 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

To Mother

A polluted vessel
that's what I seem to you.
Little girls are dirty
and unclean.
It's their vaginas which will be moist and ooze
that make them so.
They can't pee standing up.
They can't control its direction.
When they grow up they will bleed:
not once, but regularly;
not decently, but through a part of their bodies
which is better not named.
Little girls are naughty
because they make little boys
interested in all these things
which should never be looked at
and never be said.

© waggypolly 2006

This is Polly, still Wagging
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angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
1/21/2006 8:25 am

Wow Polly! And it has been such since Biblical times when women left the camps during their cycle because they were unclean! Well, crap, I'd be spending a lot of time out of the camp this days. What inspired this one?

rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
1/21/2006 10:31 am

this reminds me of something i wrote long ago -- but yours in much more succinct and you've said it much better!

i really think this an excellent piece of writing. thank you!

[blog freelove999]

rm_activeneager 67M
2 posts
1/21/2006 1:44 pm

Well, Polly,

If your intention is to describe our parents perception of the female body and those who enjoy the carnal pleasures, then you have a winner. Excellent writing - and much deeper than most readers will comprehend.


interested13563 53M
2557 posts
1/21/2006 3:00 pm

Very well written Waggy! I couldn't agree more!

rm_anacortes 74M
2850 posts
1/21/2006 3:48 pm


I hope you get lots of posts to this one of yours.. You seem to touch on sooooooooooooooo many things..

Tell me/ us about your Dad, ok???

rm_anacortes 74M
2850 posts
1/21/2006 8:52 pm


I am not yet LIBERATED... I like to be ALONE with a Goddess..

heheheheheh old fashioned eh? lol

angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
1/21/2006 9:21 pm

Thanks Polly....nothing would be better than for us to join you! Here's wishing that one day that might happen.

smartmama 57F

1/22/2006 8:14 am

Can I come too, pretty please?!


LilSquirt_4mfm 67M/67F
3394 posts
1/22/2006 2:21 pm

hi polly

Have seen you around in friends places ...intended to visit you .... noticed your wise, sexy and funny cumments. And, being of similar .... err .... maturity .... lol.

So glad u saw our guy's (ilsgicemru) latest post ...... so many of his "quality" friends have seen (and helped) him along his path. I so admire how you all helped him. I just came into the series comparatively recently, timing happened to be right on the money for my silly sexy ways, as he progressed along his path. His most recent post seems like he's pretty much there ... makes us all so happy for him.

Re the fem wet "forbiden" bit, and i hope you dont mind a link on your site, may i suggest some good reading on the subject under this post of ours Technical Info on Squirting . We will be placing a lot more info on the subject, just need time to organize and verify that it all is valid.

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
1/22/2006 3:24 pm

Polly, if this is where your life once was, then I admire you even more for the unique and wise person that you are. (If that is possible.)

May I also come along on that ride? I would truly enjoy learning more about you town, and enjoying listening and learning more about you. And in doing so, more about myself.

I bow to your grace, unlisted

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
1/22/2006 8:05 pm

I wish I could join you Waggy! But at least,
imagine you have all of your friends here,
there with you!

keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
1/23/2006 6:45 am

That is a rather Victorian attitude for her to have about nature. It's the 21st Century now, don't ya know?

LadySunrise 33F  
2432 posts
1/23/2006 3:11 pm

all great comments

nice polly!

live more, laugh often, love much

rm_papy_ 51F
169 posts
1/24/2006 1:35 am

i'm pleased in the western world that we have all moved forward from this view but so sad and angry that other women in other cultures go through much worse than we could ever have in our worst nightmares

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
1/24/2006 4:15 pm

Papy: Unfortunately we have not moved so forward as we would like
to believe. I have met many people who have similar attitudes as
those mentioned in the poem. It is painful to see young, beautiful
women thinking low of themselves and suffering psychologically because in their family environment they were brought up to believe there is something wrong with their nature and their sexuality. I have even met some who believe that their most attractive features are digusting. So, we still have a long way to go before we finally cure ourselves from such mental deseases.

VATraveler1948 68M

1/24/2006 7:45 pm


I'd love to see the sights but I think it may require a bus!

__Huntress__ 55M/57F

1/31/2006 4:26 am

First thought ... "WOW" ... !


mm0206 68F
7767 posts
2/4/2006 6:42 pm

Thank you Polly for this well written verse.

Thank God there are some men that dont abide by prehistoric instincts any more!!.....

It reminded me of the Book ...."The Red Tent"... should be a must read for all modern females 8-80.
my thanks again Polly... keep on waggin!


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