Just a little poem.. ;)  

tyrisshadowflame 37F
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8/18/2005 2:39 am

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Just a little poem.. ;)

Helloooooo... It's amazing what a couple of shots of After Shock and a Tom Collins will do for your mood. Anywhos, I wrote a poem the other night. I hope you like... (If you don't, you know where the exit is.) It's freeform, meaning it doesn't have to rhyme unless I want it to.. I don't have a title, but maybe someone can come up with one for it.

Your golden tresses
Soft as silk
Gently caressing
My breasts

Awakening a fire
Intensely blazing
With desire

Mouth eager to devour
Eyes dark with lust
Willing servant to your power
Your commands I obey

I think it's pretty good, considering that I haven't written any poetry since that one chick in MI.


goddessofbitches 41M/33F

8/18/2005 12:12 pm

Very nice. I can see that you are starting to open up more. Congrats...you should call it...Desire....or The new me's poem.


Always The Bitch

tyrisshadowflame 37F

8/18/2005 11:56 pm

Hmmm. I think like Desire. Very appropriate title. I'm working on some other ideas, so maybe I'll have something in a day or so.


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