Trying Something New.... Please Give Me Your Thoughts...  

travelingintexas 41M
8/29/2005 5:59 pm
Trying Something New.... Please Give Me Your Thoughts...

Arm in arm they walked along the garden path
commenting on the beautiful roses along the way.
They stopped for a moment to sit on a swing,
then he embraced her as he looked into her eyes.

He could see the love & desire sparkling there
as his lips kissed the corners of her mouth,
her eyelids, and brushing her lips again -
his kiss deepened and their tongues danced.

They picked up the picnic basket & blanket,
as they strolled toward the shade of the oak tree. Spreading the coverlet upon the ground
she poured the sparking wine into their goblets.

Sitting there in silence they sipped from the glasses, their eyes slowly devoured one another, seductively. A meadowlark sang a sweet melody in the distance, as the summer breeze whispered through the trees.

After their long separation it was good to be together, moving closer he began kissing her neck tenderly. While removing her dainty clothes piece by piece he kissed each revealed part of her body enticingly.

Kisses spiraling downward along a familiar path,
with each kiss and caress finding a place of passion. She whispered in a husky voice from fevered desire, as she moved sensuously, captivated in adoration.

He nurtures the rosebud with special affection,
as it blooms into a beautiful enchanting flower,
opening delicate petals to share its passion
and the sweet flowing nectar of love.

The keeper of the rose tenderly bestows his love, enticing with gentle motion, fulfilling his desire. As the sun sets and shades of the evening gather, they lay entwined in a bond of serenity and peace.

rm_txrose4uNTX 57F
3289 posts
8/29/2005 9:00 pm

Very interesting.... very interesting indeed!!!


DefiniteTrouble 50F

8/29/2005 9:12 pm

Oh wow T...very impressive. Damn impressive.

LustGoddess2469 50F  
2453 posts
8/29/2005 9:18 pm

Ummmmm....kinda too sticky sweet. Nice verbage and use of words though.

You're other stuff is much better - more "you", if you know what I mean.


Synn74 42F
1206 posts
8/29/2005 11:09 pm


I welcome you to the House of Syn...

Barbiebunny69 43F

8/30/2005 12:11 am

aww..sweet.... keep it up

Barbiebunny69 43F

8/31/2005 12:09 pm

For gods sakes ma..bunnies cant read small print!! STOP!!! OKOK i give back the strawberry hill but u aint getting the bean bag!

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