fallen angel  

tieupgurl 39F
5 posts
8/20/2005 1:42 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

fallen angel


well I wrote this when I was really horny one night on of my favs I have written enjoy all

AmberSolaire 42M

8/20/2005 8:44 am

Can I suggest you break it down into chunks.Most of us are lazy, so however good the story is we wont finish it unless it is.From what I have read it has promise.........

Keep blogging


kevinwade69 41M
20 posts
8/21/2005 12:05 am

maybe we could try some of that stuff.


MillsShipsGayly 51M

8/21/2005 7:14 am

Great story but agree ... 2 chunks Airport and then the Sex .....
Do fallen angels fall far ?


rm_BruceW59 57M

8/21/2005 10:16 am

Hot story, hot lady, can't wait to meet her and give her some steamy sexcapde to write about next!


tieupgurl 39F

8/22/2005 12:48 am

haha no fallen angels fall and fall hard
I know chunks guys but god this thing does not let you edit it damn sorry boys and girls next one I do I will pay closer attion to tha t


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