ode to lilie  

supinefeline 51M
660 posts
2/16/2006 7:26 pm

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6/5/2008 1:18 am

ode to lilie

Come Lilie
let me play you,
bring forth an aria,
from between your silken thighs,
draw my rozened bow,
across the gutted strings,
that stripe your chest,
hold your sculptured neck,
and finger a symphony of moans
from your parted mouth.

in a duet of rapture,
let us plunder the works
of the masters.
coax amadeus from your breast,
beethoven from your nether lips,
and draw forth johann sebastion
from the deepest reaches
of your wantoness.

you, my Stradavarius,
you, my Steinway,
you my Scala, my Bolshoi.
my Opera House.
Come, let me play you.

moonfire2u 69F
2602 posts
2/17/2006 4:45 am

very clever...

kind thoughts,

Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

2/17/2006 3:25 pm

with your bow
and her instrument
the duet creates
such intoxicating music

the need
to only close one's eyes
and capture
the haunting melody
by the percussive blows
a simple kiss
the intermezzo
and the opus continues
to its finale

supinefeline 51M

2/18/2006 12:20 pm

moonfire thank you, kind thuoghts back at you!


supinefeline 51M

2/18/2006 12:22 pm

SA4U .... you remembered all the music terms i forgot, but wanted to use! thank you lou for this beautiful offering!


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

2/19/2006 2:46 am

There are times, like this, when you know a single work should stand utterly alone ... as if blazoned by the sun ... this is golden, my precious friend!

supinefeline 51M

2/19/2006 6:41 am

huntress i am always embarassed to receive such praise from my contemporaries, all i can say is that without her inspiration all this would be meaningless! never before i met her have i felt the need, the desire, to put in words my passion, my desire, my emotions! she is my inspiration, my sunset, my sunrise, my picture-painter, and i am just the medium through which she sculpts herself on my soul!

thank you huntress

lilie1977 39F

2/19/2006 7:08 am

till you appeared before me,i was not tuned.
You found me,tuned me and play me...thank you.

supinefeline 51M

2/21/2006 5:25 pm

    Quoting lilie1977:
    till you appeared before me,i was not tuned.
    You found me,tuned me and play me...thank you.
lilie ... i will hold your sculpted form against my neck, and urge from your body music full of joy, full of angst, full of sorrow, full of anticipation... and i will weep at the sound of such ecstacy, for i will be the only audience!

__Huntress__ 55M/57F

2/26/2006 4:02 am

Hold her ever close, my friend
for without her
the world you know
will surely collapse
and turn
to dust ...


supinefeline 51M

2/28/2006 12:20 pm

huntress ...happiness is a rare bird captured, one could keep it for oneself, but then no one else could see the flare of its wings, or hear the beauty of its call, and that would be a selfish act indeed! i treasure what i have, and keep it, and love it, from day to day, in full appreciation of the fact that one day, it could be gone! life is fleeting, and of our place in this world i am not sure, nor perhaps want to know the answer!

the bird must fly, the bird must sing... for all!

i am sure you know what i mean!


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

3/1/2006 6:56 pm

Supinefeline ...

That is perhaps
the most beautiful thing
any man
has ever said
about a woman ...

What I wouldn't give
to see the sunrise in your eyes
when you look at her ...

to hear the nightingale way
you would whisper her name ...

to be your hands just for a moment
so I too could feel what inspires you so ...


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