if i could be a tempest  

supinefeline 51M
660 posts
3/7/2006 4:06 am

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if i could be a tempest

if i could be a tempest,
i would bring upon your shores,
the force of poseiden's domain,
great angry waves of green and blue,
to cleanse you,
of life's darkness...

storm embrace

if i could be a tempest,
i would bring upon your walls,
screaming, howling winds,
tornados and whirlwinds
that would whisper,
"be still my love, be quiet..."

hurricane caress

if i could be a tempest,
i would rain down upon you,
torrential gales and forked lightening,
tortured clouds and thunderbolts
that would lead your way,
in darkest hour...

typhoon love


sassybelle21 32F
13313 posts
3/7/2006 4:49 am

That's a great piece

Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

3/7/2006 5:47 am

How perfect to read something like your poem on this particular morning! Although it was not your intention...I thank you for this!

Your work, as always, lovely!

supinefeline 51M

3/7/2006 4:32 pm

sassybelle ... thank you for the compliment and welcome to my blog. i think this is your first visit so come on in, put your feet up and grab a beer...


supinefeline 51M

3/7/2006 4:34 pm

SA4U ... hi lou, i am always happy to have you visit, especially if i can make your morning... pull up a chair, the newspapers on the table and there's coffee in the pot...

__Huntress__ 55M/57F

3/11/2006 6:03 am

And yet another masterpiece as I ponder this morning my elementary prose ...


supinefeline 51M

3/12/2006 2:54 pm

huntress ... there is nothing elemetary about your prose! it oozes sexuality!


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