We met....  

MsLoveRose 33F  
2019 posts
9/1/2005 11:57 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

We met....

My eyes closed
Lying in the night grass
Cool
The wind whispers
The trees shudder
The stars sparkle

My eyes closed
You are near
The butterflies inside warms me
A smile wipes away my blank face
I can hear your soul call for me
Nothing

My eyes are closed
Lying in the night grass
You sat beside me
You wept
Cried to the moon
Cursed the night

That kept you awake

My eyes are open
I touch your hand
You know its me
I grab your face
Full of sorrow
Full of empty

Your eyes are closed
You can feel me
You can smell me
You can hear me

My eyes are closed
I can feel you
I can smell you
I can hear you

We met when our eyes were closed….

sunrise

© copyright 2005 sunrise


live more, laugh often, love much


rm_sunny173 69M
7 posts
9/2/2005 4:33 am

Angelou, Browning and all the rest, move over we have a budding poet in your mist and she is really good...Sunshine keep the words flowing.
You have a spirit that lifts all others.


redswallow777 48M
6810 posts
9/2/2005 8:57 am

I like how you use all your senses.....in the middle of the night.


rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
9/5/2005 1:07 am

mmmm... i like this very much; there are other things than eyes needed for two people to truly meet...



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MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
9/6/2005 2:09 pm

thanks so much sunny!!!!

redbird...when the words find my heart...my mind has a way of sorting them as if its what is happening

free thank you! there are always more than a few things that we need to connect

live more, laugh often, love much


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