No, you didnt!  

MsLoveRose 33F  
2019 posts
9/8/2005 11:26 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

No, you didnt!

Honesty is the best policy, didnt you hear?? The last time i felt this...i cried, you were there! Remember?? My mind was gone...my feelings unsorted...my soul shaken....

Did you feel it??

NO you didnt.

you said i am here for you. Gave me a shoulder to cry on..MY tears...you caught, held me in your arms...safe???

No you didnt.

the words fell straight from your eyes...your never-changing eyes....am i mistaken??? our minds were as one...didnt you tell me.????

no you didnt.

~you were never there!

© copyright 2005 sunrise


live more, laugh often, love much


redswallow777 48M
6810 posts
9/9/2005 7:32 am

The beauty of a poem is that each person might take something slighly different for it's meaning because each comes with their unique history and unique view of life. "No, you did't"....for me is a poem about a loved one who doesn't come thru for them....it is a lament.


Goldenhairgodess 63F
396 posts
9/9/2005 12:14 pm

Hi Sunrise;
Something about your prose rings true for me but in more then one way.
A person may pretend that they are there, but you find out that they never really cared-Or they promised to be there, but failed to arrive,
or they are a hoped for someone, not yet met. Regardless of which it was for you, it was beautiful.


MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
9/9/2005 10:03 pm

i do understand that redbird...

thanks golden...it was a bit of all of it...no one there...false promises...high expectations...and the one yet to come close

live more, laugh often, love much


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