Last night...  

MsLoveRose 33F  
2019 posts
9/4/2005 2:38 pm

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Last night...

i sit in the park
with the sky, the trees, the wind
and then i see it

a shooting star passed
and it took my breath away
in awe it left me


the stars glistened bright
the breeze swept throughout the trees
the night i became...

© copyright 2005 sunrise


live more, laugh often, love much


MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
9/4/2005 2:54 pm

a few verses of a haiku!!!!

i had to take a trip to do some sunrise...soul searching! refresh my thoughts and embrace nature...i went to a nearby park and laid in the grass...it was nice because i was just inside a bunch of trees...singing to the night!!!! And once i stop...to smile and let the night pierce me...i saw it...a shooting star...and i think i felt it shoot through me....i was that excited!!!!

In my time there i think i got a hold of myself...these late days of summer really pulled a number on me and my emotions were flying every which of way...and i think i just needed to pull myself together!!!!

well i love the haiku form...i have some really good pieces from them.....

self expression is always such a powerful thing to me!

live more, laugh often, love much


redswallow777 48M
6810 posts
9/6/2005 10:51 am

Thanks for sharing the shooting star with us sunrise. They are so amazing....blink and you miss it like so much of nature. Sometimes I wonder if I was the only one to notice it's ever so brief life of fire.

Mmmmm....just had another thought but will put it in an e-mail instead.


sleeplessknight1 68M

9/6/2005 3:03 pm

Seeing a shooting star, seeing a comet... makes us think, how wonderful nature is and how insignificant we are.
People in the world have become big headed. Sometimes we just need to sit, think... and be in awe of nature, and the wonderful miraculous universe....


MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
9/6/2005 3:35 pm

sleepless you are so right!!! all we have is nature...and time...so why not appreciate it all!!!

redbird...i love to see shooting stars...makes me miss hawaii even more...i would go out and get lost in the stars!

live more, laugh often, love much


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