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MsLoveRose 33F  
2019 posts
11/20/2005 4:01 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

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Knock, Knock…..

my heart races
Knock, Knock, Knock…..

*keys jingle…
Unfamiliar of the right key,
A struggle
As the intensity builds
*click…followed by a silent sweep
Door open
Eyes searching
You
See
ME
Perched
By the fireplace
Contemplating
Knowing
That you want me
Without even asking
Your chilled hands
Touch my shoulder
My gaze grows deeper
In the fire
You kneel kissing softly
I am numb
You try to look
Into my eyes
But they are not there
For the fire is strong
Within me
You touch familiar
Spots that would
Normally make me shudder
Nothing
I didn’t even blink
Sunrise
You call my name
Sunrise…*louder
From a distance....
I think I can hear you
SUNRISE
This time with a shake
NOOOOOOOOOO
I scream
when the fire
Fades
I meet your gaze
You ask whats wrong
The hot tears show

The fire is gone……


© copyright 2005 sunrise

MOOD: overpowered then drained then shaken then...hurt


live more, laugh often, love much


ilsgicemru 72M
2822 posts
11/20/2005 6:56 pm

I have to come back to this a few more times, a few more times.[//size]


rm_baldlovin 35M

11/21/2005 6:41 am

Nice sunrise. The beauty of a flikkering fire, the loks in each others eyes... that's just what makes life beautiful sometimes.


MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
11/21/2005 9:03 am

thanks ilsgicemru inspiration comes from within!!!

asianlady thanks for stopping by....

this entry isnt about being serious...its about being pulled away from healing within...the desires and the greediness of others....

OH Im doing ok....this is just another form of self expression....as far as life having a happy ending...I KNOW....i never once said something was wrong with life.... and writing cheers me up...even when i write about the darker...more stressful times!!! THANKS anyway!!

Thanks baldlovin and welcome!! feel free to stop by any time!!!

live more, laugh often, love much


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