Ordeal  

starlight_runner 39F
817 posts
9/21/2005 6:40 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Ordeal

What is wrong my eye?
You are never dry
except when the day fades and the moons in the sky.

Imprisoned by passion beyond understanding
He gives you all
But yet you have nothing

What good the trappings of riches?
The clothes
The stables
If they are but yours in name
sacraficed in exchange for the love you thought you knew.

As he leaves you escape........
Slip out unoticed and run
fast
free
and breathless

To dance in the fields where nature is free
To forget all your worries
for a moment your free

Until the sun brings with it daybreak
and the turn of that key.



tamethytension 54M
2320 posts
9/21/2005 7:12 am

Welcome back, missed you ... hope you can stay awhile.

cheers

TTT


Loosetooth 41M
1146 posts
9/21/2005 11:10 am

Thine eye has nothing wrong with it,
Other than it sees all to clear,
So to wish it dry,
May be to wish it dead,
Question not your need to cry.

And as for nature it never is free,
Only in your dream,
Every dance step is taken on credit,
And the repayment plan,
From your pierced heart will debit.

Is that not what makes the freedom sweeter?


GleesFlakyShawl 50M
1620 posts
9/21/2005 11:19 am

welcome back runner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


rm_EE407 41F
3903 posts
9/21/2005 3:17 pm

Welcome back hunz...
What a lovely poem


rm_luke69iner 48M
3275 posts
9/22/2005 12:05 pm

dance free star


S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
A persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
Questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma perciocche giammai di questo fondo
Non torno vivo alcun, s'i'odo il vero,
Senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo
.
~Dante~


barbiebunny 36F
5597 posts
9/26/2005 7:41 pm

and a kiss for you always star...

Its good to be...ME


keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
9/26/2005 9:02 pm

Here's wishing your days will be as free as your nights!


interested13563 53M
2557 posts
9/28/2005 5:34 pm

Yes, forget your worries for a moment....


MrPloerty 55M

9/30/2005 2:30 am

This is a fantastic poem
Even i had trouble 2 keep an eye dry
T you


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