slightlyjadedone 50F
194 posts
11/12/2005 8:43 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm


I know you hear my thoughts

They cascade within your soul

I know you hear my thoughts

They linger in the unknown

I know you feel my sighs

They blow within the wind

I know you feel my tears

As the rain gently pounds the window paine

I feel the torement deep within my partial soul

The judgement call that rings

Guilt ragging consuming tearing you apart within

Fighting the thoughts

That will not stop

I know you hear me

I know you feel my pain

I know that you truly see

That you and I are one in the same

I remain in silence

For it is not for me to speak

All you need to do is listen to your heart and you will see what you seek

I know you hear me

You know I am not gone

For if you just close your eyes

I am still within your arms

bullseyetou 63M
175 posts
11/12/2005 6:14 pm

Too bad he couldn't love. How did I do on this riddle? :-

slightlyjadedone 50F

11/12/2005 7:45 pm

Interesting...why would you say he couldnt love? I find it interesting that you came to that conclusion....after you tell me I will explain what it is I wrote about *laughs*

bullseyetou 63M
175 posts
11/13/2005 5:32 am

Sure - I saw turmoil on his part that in some way blocked release.
That could be emotional or physical; that part I don't know.
I assigned gender only because I know the poster to be feminine.
I also felt that she was unavailable herself but still there in spirit.
My 1st instinct was an emotional barrier unbroken but longed to be by both.
I see where it could be more complex or simply off on another route.

Isn't that the way of art. *smile*

slightlyjadedone 50F

11/13/2005 6:46 am

*smiles* perfect Bull

triag916 51M

12/3/2005 1:30 pm

Hello, Lost one.

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