Hands  

slightlyjadedone 50F
194 posts
8/24/2005 4:34 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Hands

My hand slowly lifts
Raised in the air
As my eyes slowly shut
Pressing my palm in the air
Reaching out ot feel you
The ache is just to real
A brief moment your fingers touch mine
As I draw in a breath
You are gone
As my eyes open
A fainting touch of what was
A yearning for what will be
Will always remain ....


likeableguy1964 52M

8/24/2005 10:41 pm

are those your poems? they are nice

it sounds like you are a bit of a tourchered soul, it sucks when things don't work out for you the way you alwas figured they would. enjoy the love of your children and use that strenth to help you through your rough time. things will look better sooner than you think.

you sound like a good soul.


slightlyjadedone 50F

8/25/2005 1:53 pm

thank you and yes they are my poems thoughts dreams whatever at the moment I start writing...sometimes ok..sometimes better *laughs* sometimes just bad lol...thank you I hope i am a good soul lol...or a good egg ...damn charlie and the chocolate factory might say something different....*laughs*


grumble2000 55M

8/26/2005 11:02 pm

I'd like to think you were thinking about me when you wrote this. Just know I am thinking about you now.


triag916 51M

9/27/2005 10:24 pm

My Presence Near...
Yearning To Touch...
Static...
An Energy Created...
Between Us...
We Unite...


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