slightlyjadedone 50F
194 posts
8/30/2005 6:20 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm


The other day as I was walking outside a flash of autumn soared pass my eyes

The unmistakable smell within the air

Coolness that brushes past your skin

You can actually feel the earth prepare for slumber

Sheading what is heavy and tired aching from the summer sun

Dropping to ground

Waiting for the autumn rain to burry it within its soil

Building a blanket for the winter

The bitter cold cacoon that wraps around us

Turning our days into nights

Our thoughts into dreams of spring


The one season I feel glad to be alive

To see the changing in colors of the world

To see everything try to hold on to the last days of summer

I say let them go

Dance in rain and winds of change

triag916 51M

8/31/2005 4:35 pm

I like this a lot. It's my favorite time of year. I don't think I could have put it as elegantly as you did. PS I get no mail here

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