If you see her, tell her I love her  

sircookalot 51M
110 posts
12/8/2005 9:59 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

If you see her, tell her I love her

We met one morning, a bright summer day
the anticipation of you seemed like forever and a day
You filled my heart from the very start,
the arrival of you- I did my part
My love for you could have filled the ocean
I learned a new form of devotion
The sun was so bright, the sky so clear
I held you so tight, I thought you so dear
my smile so bright, I knew you were all mine
I had one word to call you, my Sunshine
Life can be cruel and unfair to you
my lessons and values I've tried to impart on you
god how proud I am of you!
Your life has been torn in two directions
at some point you can choose your own connections
There's been two of us to shape you and mold you
each of our roles so unique
we each desire nothing more than for you to peak

Life can be cruel an unfair to you
life changed, I live so far from you!
we've laughed and cried and got so mad!
but for some time now I've been so sad
your contact and time from me taken
my heart's torn apart and taken
the loss of you in my life has left such a void
all the events that got us here, has just got me so annoyed!
I've called and visited, god how I've tried!
inside of me a big part has died

If you see my sunshine, tell her..... I love her


rm_goddess1946 106F
13518 posts
12/8/2005 11:05 pm

it is sad and yet change happens..........

I am now...hearing the song playing in my head..

You are my sunshine...my only sunshine...
You make me happy ...when skies are grey...
You'll never know, dear, how much I love you...
Please don't take...my sunshine... away......


hearing your heart, sircook... {=}

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


sircookalot 51M
110 posts
12/9/2005 3:15 am

thank you goddess,

I used to sing that to her everyday, did you have to wat til the end to see it was abut a cild?

to my friend goddess, thank you


rm_goddess1946 106F
13518 posts
12/10/2005 4:01 pm

nope...i picked that up in verse one ....

children are our special hope for tomorrow...
teachers hand picked by God for us to love and cherish....
our best teachers after all has been said and done
as we strive to teach and prepare them for this thing we call life.

i know that you are ...an amazing dad, sir... thanx 4 sharing.. {=}

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


Luvinlife2822 43F

1/15/2006 4:09 pm

It is always sad when it is the children that pay for our mistakes. That was an awesome poem. I can tell you are a good daddy with a big heart. I hope it works out where you can see her more. I'm sure she knows her daddy loves her much!


sircookalot 51M
110 posts
1/16/2006 1:50 pm

thanks luvinlife I appreciate your comments. I hope at some point to see her and reconnect when her mother does not have the same influences over her.


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