New Offering from Uncle Arioch's Poetry Corner  

silvertongue65 52M
35 posts
6/29/2005 10:31 am

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10/8/2006 9:26 pm

New Offering from Uncle Arioch's Poetry Corner


Voices of Departed Spirits 6/2005

Raucous release of departed spirts
Escaping unbidden into the air
Unfettered, unrestrained by the body
They fly freely upon the ether

Their erruption illicits laughter
Looks of derision and disapproval
At the guiltless guardian
Who grins through his embarassment

Why should such an earthy occurance
Give rise to ridicule and scorn
In other relams, it is common courtesy
An expected exclamation from guest to host

Why do such pointed ponderings come
When I would while away an evening
In conversation and companionship?
On such matters I ponder overmuch

And so, I enjoy the gravid gourmet goodies
And imbibe another earthy ale
And unashamedly await
Another raucous release of departed spirits

JDLA2 61M

6/30/2005 1:55 pm

I think your poem stinks.


silvertongue65 52M
31 posts
7/2/2005 10:23 am

JDLA2... you are entitled to your opinion. Just remember that opinions are like assholes... everyone has one, and they all stink.


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