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shybutneedinit 47F
83 posts
7/12/2006 1:02 pm

Last Read:
9/19/2006 10:14 am

more Poetry


This is a rough draft of one, and might be a bit all over the place..lol but I was just writing to write.

Well here it is:


Insatiable

Being in your arms,
I feel content,
safe, wanted desired.
So many feelings flood my mind,
Overpowering me,
Sweeping me away to extasy!

your touch sends shivers
All through me.
You know just what spots
to hit and when.

You tease me, bringing me to the brink,
making me shiver,
then starting all over again
Making me squirm and moan.

Again and again,
I moan and scream your name!,
I can't take much more, I tell you
You just smile and continue
to tease and please me,
I wan't you now I scream!

Finally, you take me,
From the intense pleasure,
I moan loudly, as I arch my back,
to meet you.

Saying your name, I shudder again again
In extasy.
You can't take much more now,
We both reach new heights,
panting and gasping
trying to catch our breath.

Now we lay side by side
holding each other,
trying to slow our heartbeats down.

Trailing my finger down your chest,
I am content.
I kiss you,
Losing my self in it.

Your arms encircle me,
bringing me closer,
as you moan, and whisper in my ear.

We are insatiable,
Never getting enough of one another,
As I lay back down in your arms,
we drift off to sleep.


written July 4/06

lissi888888 52F
1401 posts
7/12/2006 4:42 pm

That was beautiful hon. I'm so glad you posted it I love that feeling...*sigh*


shybutneedinit 47F

7/16/2006 11:38 pm

    Quoting lissi888888:
    That was beautiful hon. I'm so glad you posted it I love that feeling...*sigh*
that feeling is the best and I can't get enough of that feeling. *grins* Glad you liked the poem hun, more to come soon


ospreyaloft 61M
24 posts
8/11/2006 2:29 pm

Shy.. you have a delicate sense of the important feelings, thoughts and emotions that bind one another to each, so differently and in so many lingering and lasting ways.. some like perfume caressing every pore and painting memories on the hidded inner flesh, and others nasty and hurtful, making the former ones so much more of value..

You have very touching instincts and imagination.. warm and helpful

ty


shybutneedinit 47F

8/12/2006 7:18 am

    Quoting ospreyaloft:
    Shy.. you have a delicate sense of the important feelings, thoughts and emotions that bind one another to each, so differently and in so many lingering and lasting ways.. some like perfume caressing every pore and painting memories on the hidded inner flesh, and others nasty and hurtful, making the former ones so much more of value..

    You have very touching instincts and imagination.. warm and helpful

    ty
Well ty so much osprey... great to have feedback on what I love to do, write.


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