Poetry  

shybutneedinit 47F
83 posts
7/12/2006 9:56 am

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8/24/2006 9:22 pm

Poetry


My Darkness

It comes
like a thief in the night
Pure darkness
That overtakes me
Takes my thoughts
and turns them
To despair
Takes my love
and makes it hurt so much
Takes my strength
and makes me wonder why I am here.
It comes like a thief in the night
The darkness
The terrible darkness,
Oh plz, give me the strength!
To wake up
One more day.

Written Oct 28th/05


Misery

Gasping, coughing,
Fighting for air!
My Misery

It feels like I am being stabbed
Repeatedly in my heart
I ache, I hurt, I cry out to anyone
In this misery.

Hopelessness takes over
Would anyone really miss me?
If I were to go where not one
soul could find me?
My misery

Gasping for breath,
It seems like I am being suffocated
by it.
I can't breathe, My lungs hurt
My heart hurts, My mind is screaming
for someone to hear
My misery

Someone plz make it stop!
It engulfs me,
As I start to cry
My misery!

Written nov. 17/05


Ok those are two of my poems, I have tons more. Will post more another day *smiles* til then, have a great day

PoemsFoetiFakir 65M
17 posts
7/12/2006 10:43 am

Dear, shybutneedinit, Wonderful writing. Your use of words and phrases is very powerful. Thanks for sharing. Hope that you are feeling better now, and that you will share poems that express joy from time to time.


lissi888888 52F
1401 posts
7/12/2006 4:44 pm

{{{{{{{shy}}}}}}}} anytime you feel like that...you call me...I am here sweetie...always

And unlike others I don't care what time it is....ever....and I actually mean it.


rm_nylon070 46M/55F
2 posts
7/13/2006 3:07 pm

When I left you I never realized I was stumbling into the black nothing. You were my light to find my way home. I never knew that it grew dimmer with each passing moment. As I panicked in the dark, I didn't understand why the light just kept slipping away. In agony I screamed your name, thinking that you would hear me. In the blackest of night I cried and begged and pleaded for you to come resuce me. That is why now that I have made it through the impossible depths of that terrible dense black fog, my heart is forever broken. You were not my beacon when all hope was lost and I needed your sunshine. I ruined what kept me alive before I ventured off into the world to be punished. I ruined your trust, and then your love. And as much as that will always leave an unhealed scar, I can only blame myself for making the choices I made and breaking the sacred circle of our love. I hold no grudge against you for leaving me behind in the depths before I even knew you were gone. I honor your name and love the light that is you, my sacred wife. You will always be loved, adored, and missed. May the light always guide your way. Until the next life brings us together.....
Written July 1, 2006 - Thinking of her


shybutneedinit 47F

7/16/2006 11:40 pm

    Quoting PoemsFoetiFakir:
    Dear, shybutneedinit, Wonderful writing. Your use of words and phrases is very powerful. Thanks for sharing. Hope that you are feeling better now, and that you will share poems that express joy from time to time.
well thankyou, I am glad that you liked the poems... I enjoyed writing them. I can write about any subject on a good day. And although I write in the first person, most poems aren't about me. But thanks again


shybutneedinit 47F

7/16/2006 11:41 pm

    Quoting lissi888888:
    {{{{{{{shy}}}}}}}} anytime you feel like that...you call me...I am here sweetie...always

    And unlike others I don't care what time it is....ever....and I actually mean it.
Thank you so much for that Lissi, there are days yes that I feel overwhelmed with everything, and a friendly ear would help for sure. Hugssssssss hun.


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