Waiting...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
11/17/2005 9:18 am

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5/19/2006 9:08 am

Waiting...




Waiting

Upon awakening...
with sleep slowly turning to reality
of where I am, what I am,
and who I am...
I look beside me to see you there.

There's a kind of peace
knowing you are with me.
Knowing you trust, and believe in me.
The things we share...
this bed, this place in time...
all the things that make you who you are,
and what makes us... us.

If I didn't have you
to keep me going forward,
there would be a void.
A void that couldn't be filled
with sad songs, or others that smile my way.

Lie quietly, my love.
Be still, and let your dreams
take you where they may.
I'll stand watch over you.
and keep you close... and safe.

It's almost midnight.
The time when outside you can hear the stillness
of the world around you.
Leaves are rustling quietly.
Shadows from the street light cast dark,
almost sad images.
But there is the dawn in the hours ahead,
and the sun
will again shine.
So will you, held steady here
in my thoughts,
in my arms,
and in my love.

© copyright unlistedone 2005


caressmewell 53F

11/17/2005 10:38 am

*sighs* Beautiful!


GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
11/17/2005 10:41 am

beau ti ful

more than that, the word just hasn't been invented yet


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/17/2005 9:15 pm

Caress, I like thinking that my words produced a "sigh" from you. Makes me feel... "kinda tingly inside."

Have a fabulous day, unlisted


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/17/2005 9:26 pm

Goddess, thank you. That's very high praise...

And you know I use your poetry as a measuring stick. It is so beautiful at times. And other times, so very lonely and mysterious. It makes me want to just reach out and hold you close. To make sure nothing ever gets close that could hurt you in any way.

a quiet hug and gentle, easy thoughts, unlisted


sexyeyes375 47F

11/19/2005 12:07 pm

this makes me feel safe and loved.. this is one of your best..

most of the time when I come here and read your poems; I do not comment because I cannot put into words the feeling or thoughts you provoke. This was beautiful.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/19/2005 9:33 pm

Thank you sexy... I'm glad it makes you feel that way.

Oh, to know what goes on in your mind, sometimes. I think perhaps I just got a glimpse.

If you don't feel comfortable here, you can feel free to email me. I think I would like that. But, that is up to you. Like everything else.

Have a wonderful week. Stay warm... stay safe...

with a warm hug and kiss to the cheek, unlisted


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/20/2005 1:10 am

Thank you sexy... I'm glad it makes you feel that way.

Oh, to know what goes on in your mind, sometimes. I think perhaps I just got a glimpse.

If you don't feel comfortable here, you can feel free to email me. I think I would like that. But, that is up to you. Like everything else.

Have a wonderful week. Stay warm... stay safe...

with a warm hug and kiss to the cheek, unlisted


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