rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
8/21/2006 1:13 am

Last Read:
8/17/2007 1:46 am



I just want to take some,
if you don't mind.
I just want to borrow
a bit of yours,
to see if it's easier,
more enjoyable...
than mine.

we all have time;
but we don't always
spend it as wisely
as well
as other's seem to do.

We took time
to talk...
we took time
to share soft gazes
and warm smiles.
We have finally
taken time
to meet each other

I appreciated
the time you took
to ask the questions,
you needed to ask.
I took the time
to look at you
and answer them
without reservation.
I was more than
that you remember
answers to questions
that had been
asked before.

We shared moments
where we didn't care
who was around us
or what they might think
of how we seemed to be.
And in those moments
we found
the time shared
was time needed
by each.

I took more time
just to watch you
as you busied yourself
doing the things
that had to be done.
I saw how you
handled things with style...
and grace.
Then, I saw
you glance my way,
and with a soft smile,
knew you were
taking a moment
to share
a private second
with me.

Let's take
some more time together...
if for no other reason
than we both know
each of us needs it...
and wants it.

I don't want to
let another year pass
without you
sharing time
in my life.
At least,
sharing a moment or two
our time...

© copyright unlistedone 2006

rm_Agualein 43F
11 posts
8/21/2006 2:24 am

So SBS: Sweet, Beautiful and Sensitive...

angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
8/21/2006 7:58 am

No words......~nods head in agreement~ ......143

Theflinkychick 105F

8/21/2006 9:54 am

More words...

We seem to have caught the same train of thought, I've been preoccupied with time spent together with my wonderful man but in anticipation rather than memory... it fits well, thank you...


Not all who wander are lost.

rm_aWench4U 61M/61F
741 posts
8/21/2006 8:30 pm

Thank you for expressing my heart today.

143, Angela

Remember the past but do not dwell there.
Face the future where all our hopes stand.


Juliet610 51F

8/22/2006 12:47 am

You touched a nerve, sir. Julz and I were both a bit misty-eyed.

Forgive me for pimping, but check out "our" Blog today, For Julie. They're not my words, but what I feel. Thanks.

LustyTaurus 48M  
21253 posts
8/22/2006 10:06 pm

Wow...this was timely for me...seriously, no pun intended.

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
8/22/2006 10:33 pm

Aqualein..."SBS." Thank you for thinking so. And welcome to my blog. Please stop by anytime you like. It's always nice to see a new face here. Have a great day, unlisted one

Fly... (smiling backatcha!) I knew you would understand this one. 143, me

Angel... I'm so glad you agree with this little thought of mine. 1432! me

Polly... It's nice to know that you would give me time to talk with you. I would like that sometime. And no, I don't have your YIM. .

Flinky... the time spent "in" anticipation I always thought was time well spent. Some memories of time can be old... some still very fresh. There's a song lyric that keeps creeping into my mind. "And when we are about to say good night, I already can't wait to be with you again." Such a beautiful way of putting it, I think. 143, me.

Angel... This is such a compliment to me... thank you. Whenever I read that my poems expressed exactly what someone feels, then I know that what I wrote was right. It's one of the many things that will keep me writing more. And if these words were in your heart today, then I envy you. Have a very beautiful day, my lady... hug, me .

Jason/Julz... When I first saw your comment, I couldn't see your post. Now that I know that it is "Time In a Bottle" by Jim Croce, I am completely blown away by your compliment. I am humbled and honored that you would think that my poem would ever compare to the wonderful song Mr. Croce sang. It is one of my all time favorite songs. His songs have always been very special to me.

Thank you for linking the two of us together the way you did. And I now have a very clear view of the depth of your love for Julz, Jason. Such love is truly magical.

I pray for the both of you. If I could have my wishes come true, then the two of you would spend a long and happy life together. And that someday we would meet, smile, hug, and laugh at our time here. With love and respect, to you both, me

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
8/22/2006 10:37 pm

LT... I'm glad that it was. And thanks for stopping by. Unlisted One


8/25/2006 6:39 am

perfect timming.. that was beautiful

under the stars
We choose to write
you choose what you comprehend.
read twice and be nice
every key stroke... has a heart beat

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
8/25/2006 6:49 am

Thank you muff... I'm glad it was. hug, sweet lady, me

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