Thoughts from the back of my mind...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
11/28/2005 1:44 am

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Thoughts from the back of my mind...

Thoughts from the back of my mind...

Finding the words
aren't always easy.
Showing where
my feelings are
isn't an easy thing, either.

Laid bare
out in the open
for your appraisal.

watching you
take my measure
Taking my thoughts
to see if they ring

how long...
I'll wait.

© copyright unlistedone 2005

caressmewell 53F

11/28/2005 4:33 am

very nice

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/29/2005 11:12 pm

I'm glad you think so.

I'm glad you liked it.

It's hard for a person to open themselves up for something that could be potentially damaging or hurtful to themselves. It isn't easy to let other's see inside ourselves... where we actually are.

But sometimes... sometimes the reward for doing so is "magnificent." I tip my hat to you for trying. I know it isn't easy.
warm hug, unlisted

I made a promise to myself a long time ago, not to allow myself a safety net when it came to writing.
So, when the words flow in this direction, they flow with a near total amount of complete honesty. I won't try and stop them or refuse their entry. I guess that's "writing from the heart."

And, if that leaves me vulnerable, then that's the way it has to be.

In my opinion, I think that's why so many people enjoy reading Goddessofthedawn so much. She does this so well. Almost everyone can see themselves in her writing.)

Someone once told me, it was good for the soul. Maybe... But I'm not sure they ever actually wrote.
warmest hugs for you, unlisted

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