Those Moments...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
6/30/2005 8:26 pm

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Those Moments...


Those Moments...

There are moments
that can't be forgotten.
Times when
nothing else mattered
nothing else existed.
Moments when you held me
in a helpless state
and I didn't want to be
anywhere else.

Eyes capturing eyes
from across the room.
Looking away...
only
to look again.

When eye contact locks on
and won't let you turn away
from your eyes.
Searching the eyes
knowing what you are thinking.
The small smile that comes
upon the realization
you feel the same as I.

The first touch of your fingers
lightly, tentative at first
the searching found.
How my fingers feel on yours.
The soft easy touch
as we move together
exploring the moment
then continuing our search.

The moment before the first kiss.
Looking deep into your eyes.
Seeing your wants
your desire
your needs.
All matching my own.

Lips not touching
Feeling the heat
from your breathe;
but still resisting the touch.

Wanting the moment to last
to build to a fevered pitch
that can only be felt
by us only in this moment.

Lips now softly grazing
Moist, wet, wanting...
needing to fullfill.
The deep eractic breathing
that neither of us can stop.
Like life itself
depends on this moment
of lips on lips
tongues dancing
embrace becoming harder
more demanding.

Moments that can't be forgotten.
Moments that should never
be forgotten.

The first touch of our bodies
skin to skin.
The coolness
the heat.
The uncontrollable shaking
of my hands... and knees
wanting to find you
hold you
feel your warmth
and never let that moment
of first contact ever end.

The smell of your hair
and skin as we kiss each other's
necks and shoulders.
Feeling the tautness
and coolness of your body
and you move slightly
making each of us shiver
as every part of us
is coming aware of the other.

The moment of coming
together as one.
The heat,
the fire,
the exquisite moment
when the urge is to move
quick...
deep...
The lose myself completely within you.
To have you make me a part of you
forever.
To resist the urge
and hold the moment
and burn it into the mind for all time.

To look into your eyes
and see the same look
the first moment
we saw one another
from across the room.

The moments that can't be forgotten.
The moments that should never
be forgotten.
The moments of you
that stay with me... forever.

© copyright unlistedone 2005

rm_lovelyLady 64F
434 posts
7/14/2005 4:57 pm

I simply envy her................


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/15/2005 2:04 am

I would hope LL, that you have had these moments. I hope everyone has felt these moments. They should come to you when you are down, and bring all their warmth with them when they do.
Why would you envy her....?


rm_lovelyLady 64F
434 posts
7/16/2005 6:13 pm

Yes, I have memories of moments........... never to be forgotten.........
There is just something about your writing that touches me in a good way.........
In a way that brings back more sweet memories


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/17/2005 12:43 am

Then the words did exactly what I intended them to do. I want them to make the reader lose themselves in their own memories and remember the emotions... brought about by the words. Sweet memories...those are the best kind.


rm_lovelyLady 64F
434 posts
7/19/2005 9:32 am

lol {=}


GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
7/29/2005 2:02 pm

thank you


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/30/2005 12:43 am

You're welcome, goddess. Though perhaps you could fill me in "for what." You are a misterious lady that writes unbelievably well.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/30/2005 12:45 am

You're welcome, goddess. You are a mysterious lady who writes unbelievably well. I wish I knew exactly "what" the thank you is for, though.


Theflinkychick 105F

7/30/2005 2:46 pm

Good memories and anticipation of those to come...
good, good stuff!

Not all who wander are lost.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/30/2005 11:48 pm

I'm flattered that you think that, flinkychick. And welcome to my blog. Please stop by anytime.


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