Thinking of you...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
11/27/2005 1:35 am

Last Read:
8/8/2007 6:41 pm

Thinking of you...

the sun is rising
the air is crisp and clear.

By the time
you read this
I'm at work
doing the things
I normally do.

But I'm only thinking of you.
And the day
will go by... easy.

Thinking of you
your smile...
your eyes...
the way you turn your head
while sitting
watching me.

The sun is rising
and the air crisp and clean.
And tonight
I'll come home
to you.

© copyright unlistedone 2005

MissKittyNip26 106F

11/27/2005 10:05 am

Very nice poem!!

sexyeyes375 47F

11/27/2005 2:32 pm

very sweet

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/27/2005 11:59 pm

frnds, thank you... and for the hug thought. It's appreciated.

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/28/2005 12:09 am

Polly, you are allowed.

I'm glad you reacted positively to it.

I don't know about most posts; but I know for me, I enjoy the idea when someone reads my poetry, they want to take it as their own.

This was just a simple little thought. A daydream, if you will. A thought to provoke other thoughts. Mine, as well as for those who read it.

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/28/2005 12:16 am

Thank you Mskitty, I'm glad you stopped by.
You are welcome to drop in anytime. Enjoy, unlisted

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/28/2005 12:22 am

Sexy, thank you for your thought.
It's nice to see you here... as always.
crooked grins, unlisted

piamatter 44F

11/30/2005 11:43 am

Very sweet unlistedone,
who wouldnt want to come home to this sentement? Hugs - Pia

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/30/2005 9:00 pm

Thank you Pia... for this thought.

I don't know, Pia. Sometimes even sentiments aren't enough. (But I know I'll keep trying... and thinking about how to make it better.)

Your countdown is almost there! I'm enjoying your blog.
hug back to you, unlisted

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