Smile Awhile...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
2/15/2006 12:57 am

Last Read:
8/16/2007 1:45 am

Smile Awhile...


Smile Awhile...

I felt you
even as the day progressed
into evening...
and on into the night.

The smile
it caused me
made me warm... safe.
And it lingered
as long as the thought
of you stayed with me.

No, it wasn't
a big flashy smile...
nor one of confidence.
It was just a smile.
A smile that brought
the easy,
knowing feelings of
"I'm okay,
because you are here,
and you care."

It was the smile
of seeing a candle,
softly casting shadows...
the smile
of watching you sleep,
safe in your/our world.

A person can be familiar
with many thoughts and nuances...
and still be comfortable
inside the smile that's created.

So, while I sit here
coffee warming my lips...
I'll watch you and think about you...
and smile awhile...
waiting for the dawn,
and you,
to wake... and cast new smiles... my way.

© copyright unlistedone 2006


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
2/15/2006 5:07 am

Once again your beautiful words paint such a beautiful picture in my mind. How lucky that woman is to feel such safety and comfort with you....to have you watch her sleep and wake up to smile at you. My heartfelt wish is that you have this in your life.....forever. And that she always wakes to smile at you. ~hugs~ 143


TabithaElectra79 38F

2/15/2006 3:26 pm

Mmmmmm...

Warm...comforting...lovely...reasuring...

I could go on...


oldman1776 78M
3164 posts
2/15/2006 4:55 pm

Very very nice.


rm_PurryKitty2 48M/50F
9753 posts
2/15/2006 4:55 pm

Very relaxing....

Sipping my coffee.

Purry {=}

Purry


VATraveler1948 68M

2/15/2006 6:17 pm

Everyone needs a "smile donor" like this.


tillerbabe 56F

2/15/2006 11:04 pm

SMILZ......Love it!


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
2/16/2006 11:32 pm

Angel, there's an old Temptation's song called, "Just My Imagination." I once knew this feeling... but it isn't, and hasn't been here for a very long time. But thank you for your wish for me. Know my wish is for the samething for you. hugs, 143
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Fly, and the same goes for you, too, pal. You are very dear to me, also. 143
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Tabs, thanks... I'm glad it made you feel that way. That reassures me to know that perhaps my poems make someone feel good. hug and sweet kiss, (feel better soon!)
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Thanks old man... it is appreciated. And it's appreciated whenever you stop by here.
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Purry, thanks. I can just picture you all relaxed, legs up, and sipping coffee as you go through blogland. Classy lady, to say the least... hugs and I'll freshen your coffee for you, unlisted
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Va... that's very true. Everyone needs a donor of smiles. But you have to look for the genuine smiles. Not the ones that will just smile when they want something. The old song, "Smiling Faces" had it right.... sometimes "they lie." and you can't imagine "the evil that lurks within." You have to find the ones that smile because they are real.


GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
2/19/2006 3:10 pm

~shakez head~ nope, no coffee here, just T


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
2/20/2006 7:45 am

Sometimes it isn't the coffee that warms the lips, gotd.... ~tz~! hug, unlisted


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