Lonely Moments...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
4/28/2006 12:12 am

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Lonely Moments...

Lonely Moments...

There have been times
when the days just seemed
too long...
and the nights lasted forever.
Those were the lonely moments...
the moments when I was without

You see,
I can smile and understand
why you do the things
you have to do.
I can support you
when you aren't near...
and I look like I'm standing
But the truth is
I'm not.
Everything inside aches...
and with every lonely moment
without you,
I feel a weakness...
a tight dull pain
that doesn't go away...
until you return.

I've seen your smiles
and I've seen the glitter
in your eyes.
I've held you close to me
when the sweat glistens
from each of us.
I understand our
love and passion.

I just don't understand
why it is
you have to have those times,
those moments
when I can't be with you.

I say I do... but I don't.

I say I'm okay... but I'm not...
not really.

Do you have those
lonely moments too?
If you do,
then why do we have
to have them...

© copyright unlistedone 2006

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
4/28/2006 2:53 am

~ nodz ~

~crawlz back under rock~

angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
4/28/2006 5:22 am

You know that I do! This touched me deeply.

gypsy1629 41F

4/29/2006 1:53 am

Simply wonderful words to go with my life and that of another at this point in time!...loved it!


Juliet610 51F

4/30/2006 9:26 pm


You truly have a gift. Your writing is so personal, and it yet touches so many in just the right way, at just the right moment. Thank you for the touch I needed.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
5/1/2006 1:13 am

gotd... I do enjoy your presence...it is often felt. hug, me

Angel... I'm glad you liked it. You have touched many here deeply, yourself. 143... me


gypsy... I'm touched that you can relate my words to what is going on in your life at the moment. Welcome to my little corner of blogland. You are most welcome here anytime. hug, unlisted one



I thank you for such a wonderful compliment. Coming from you, that really means a lot to me. And you are most welcome for the touch that was needed. I'm glad it made an impression on you... and that it helped. big hug, me

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