rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
5/14/2006 1:15 am

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5/28/2006 11:57 pm


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Sometimes, when words just doesn't quite do it... and the thoughts are there, and they just can't be expressed... Well, somethimes it just has to pour out from the heart...

It's All About You...

I want to count the seconds it takes for you to breathe in and out,
and to know every movement of your body as it's doing that.
I want to hear the sheets softly moving under you
as you get more comfortable in my arms.

I want to share quiet laughter...
and looks that never end
and are understood by only us.
I want to feel you as you warm to my skin... and my touch.

I want our love making to be...
as only we can make it be.
I want to hear you laugh as you slide your feet next to mine to keep them warm...
and I want to feel your fingers tracing lazy circles on my chest.

I want to move your hair out of my face
so I can see yours,
and know your smiling.
and that you are glad that you are there
and that we are sharing...
each other...
with each other....
as only we can do.

And in the morning...
just as the sun begins to rise,
I want to know you are still with me
as we share ourselves
with each other again
and make the day
as fresh and as new
as it's ever been... for each other.

To say I love you... just isn't enough.
To say I want you... just doesn't quite do it.
To show you how much... is only a down payment
on the rest of our lives... together.

© copyright unlistedone 2006
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VATraveler1948 68M

5/14/2006 4:26 am

Very nice, thanks for sharing it with us.

angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
5/14/2006 4:31 am

This takes my breath away every time I read it. You have such a gift to bring feelings into words. And my feet are cold this morning....where are ya? 143

HBowt2 58F

5/20/2006 3:41 pm

perfection in the writing and the sentiment....this one is special...

needitall70 46F

5/24/2006 5:14 pm

Wow...I am speechless. I stumbled across your blog today and have enjoyed reading what you have shared. You really do have a talent of putting thoughts into words. Thank You for sharing.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
5/24/2006 11:20 pm

Thank you all for stopping by. Yeah, I kinda like this one, too. If I could just somehow make the reader see it from my eyes as I see it... then I think I would really achieve what I want my poems to achieve. But knowing that each person who reads it, takes with them their own thoughts and view is pretty good, too. Hugs my friends, 143... me

Hb... you flatter me with the use of "perfection." Thank you for you thought. hug, me


Needs... thank you ma'am. (He said with a Southern draw, a smile, and with his best Southern manners.) I'm glad you enjoyed my poems. Please stop by anytime. And good luck on your blog. hug, unlisted

dreams_R_made 51M/50F

5/26/2006 9:25 pm

That has to be the most touching, beautiful thing I've ever read!

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
5/28/2006 12:47 am

Dreams R made...
Welcome to blogland.
Thank you for such a thought! And the compliment of your first comment here in blogland.
I hope you enjoy it here. There are some really fabulous people here. Just browse around. If you need any help or have any questions just ask. Unlisted

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