From "I Feel Like Writing..."  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
6/1/2006 1:28 am

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8/9/2007 1:04 am

From "I Feel Like Writing..."

This is the first of the poems from the post below, "I Feel Like Writing..." I hope it's worth your reading it. unlisted

From Maggie, "Replay ... a voice in memory"
(Good thought here, Maggie. At first glance, I thought this was about a voice left on your recorder. Then, I thought it was more of a voice from your memory. (If I got this wrong, let me know...)

Our Voice...

I still hear you,
you know...
though the hours have past,
and our time together
is just in memory now.

I can hear,
and taste your sounds.
Whispered close...
next to my neck... my face.
The sounds of you,

Your sighs
tell me alot.
The moments of holding your breathe
and letting it go...
only to hold again...
taking it in deeper...
words almost said.
Our world void
of everything
except what was felt...
at the moment.

movement within...
with eyes shut tight.
Echoes of our passion
fill me...
overwhelm me.
My voice added to yours...

And afterward...
when the candlelight
is fading...
and you are asleep
dreaming your dreams...
I'll hear
your soft moans
over and over
in my memory...
and relive the moments
of you...
our voice of love.

© copyright unlistedone 2006

HBowt2 58F

6/1/2006 3:55 am

I could read this forever....

angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
6/1/2006 6:23 am

This is incredible. I could almost feel myself holding my breath and letting it go! This is the best of you....and I feel so lucky to be able to read it. 143

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
6/3/2006 12:46 am

Vixen, HB, Angel...
Thank you for your thoughts.
You guys just don't know how good they make me feel.
My best Angel? Wow...
hugs, me

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