A Wish for You...  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
7/30/2005 3:31 am

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A Wish for You...

A Wish for You... by Unlisted One

Making you smile
can be easy...

Making you feel good
about yourself
takes more time.

I wish for you
a time
a space
a world
where warm and soft
is the norm.

Where the clouds
float easy
through blue skies
and the wind
is soft and gentle.

A place
where all you have to be...
is you.

Let me know
when you are
ready to go.

© copyright unlistedone 2005

Theflinkychick 105F

7/30/2005 2:40 pm

Love this! Ahh, yes... blogland is also the land of great free verse!! this makes me VERY happy!

Not all who wander are lost.

rm_lovelyLady 64F
434 posts
7/30/2005 11:16 pm

unlistedone You always make me feel
good about my self......
But I think that is
because I feel good about my self, too....

The other things you speak of in this piece...........
How do you know just the right things to say?
Just what I am looking for........
I am there......... in my dreams......... come join me in my dreams........
(she is thinking warm and fuzzy thoughts about the above writing of yours............. and dreaming those are also some of the thoughts of her future special friend)


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/30/2005 11:26 pm

Yes you may so trust, Polly. It's kinda like your house, with the doors and windows open, I should imagine. And thank you.

rm_EE407 41F
3903 posts
7/31/2005 10:52 am

Great I liked that one.. cheers....

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
7/31/2005 10:59 pm

Thank you, EE. So nice of you to visit. Cheers to you, also.
LL, I could get lost very easily in your soft, warm dreamworld. I could get lost in your reality, just as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
8/1/2005 2:07 am

Glad it makes you happy, flinkychick. That's what it's intended to do. Welcome to my blog.

bella_ 47F
4030 posts
8/1/2005 8:27 pm

A wonderful wish for one and for all...thank you.

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
8/1/2005 9:19 pm

You are more than welcome, bella. It's nice to read you're feeling better about yourself. Remember, you can always come here for a hug anytime you want. Or just a place to make you smile! You have a friend here...Okay? Okay!!

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
8/2/2005 10:56 pm

your friendz are lucky ...

beautiful wordz

rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
8/3/2005 2:42 am

Care to join them, Goddess? (He said with a warm smile.)
There is always room for another friend.
I had a thought the other day. You did the honor of joining with me in a poem written together. Line for line... or verse for verse. You can pick.
I know it sounds a little crazy. My mind wonders in the crazy direction more than it should. Would you be interested? I promise to do my best and not embarrass you with my writing.

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