#4... from "I Feel Like Writing..."  

rm_unlistedone 65M
3832 posts
6/3/2006 12:38 am

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#4... from "I Feel Like Writing..."


This is from a previous post, "I feel like writing."

Lady Bambi...
I am a little curious to see what you could do with "intense sexual orgasm".
My reply...
"intense sexual orgasm"... that's a tall order. Hmmm, Okay. Let's try and see where this goes.


You...(Revised)

Don't move...
I want you look at you.
I want to take
this moment
and burn
your vision
in my memory forever.

My mind
is going everyplace
totally out of control.
My hands...legs...
shake
at the thought
of you lying there
waiting...
wanting...
ready to give to me...
everything
you have to share.

Your body...
I've never seen
such a perfect body.

You toes
with the toe rings...
like your fingers,
delicate...
slender...
nails painted
in just the right color
for you.
Ankles
turning into
the legs
that seem to go on...
forever.
Trim, muscular...
in that special
feminine way.

They move up to
and become hips
with such
soft roundness
and dive
again deeply
for form your waist.

Strong, flat tummy,
skin, tanned goldenly
with your half in...
half out belly button...
moving slightly up and down
as your ribs
expand from your breathing.

I'm finding it more difficult
to breathe in...
having to remember
to breathe out.
You've gotten me
so much... and willingly,
under your spell.

Your breasts...
soft, yet firm...
rising up...
crowned by the darker,
richer colored nipples.
The valley between...
outlined by tanlines.

You neck...
strong... lean.
You chin...
the beginning of your face...
is soft...
with a small dimple
that shows
everytime you smile.

Your smile...
brighter...
easier...
than any smile
I've ever known.

Your lips...
warm... soft...
licked ocassionally
by your tongue.
Always desired by mine.
Your upturned nose,
freckles sprinkled
only in the right places
flowing upward and
between your eyes.

Oh God, your eyes.
Seemingly being able to see
me totally
from outside to in...
and with such a sparkle
and such a depth
that I know
I can never escape them...
nor do I ever want to escape.

Your forehead
covered by your hair.
You long
shimmering, soft,
wonderful smelling hair.

Don't move...
I want to remember you
as you are now.
I want to remember
the one
who ignites
such a flame in me
that my orgasm later
will never ever
be as intense...
or as strong...
as the desire...
with such unbelievable,
undeniable love
that I have
for you...
at this moment.

© copyright unlistedone 2006


HBowt2 58F

6/3/2006 2:24 am

intense....you caught it just right...


VATraveler1948 68M

6/3/2006 3:07 am

Excellent! That was very intense, I could feel the tension building with every line.


lovemetouchme5 51F
2102 posts
6/3/2006 4:14 am

Very nice! Beautiful.


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