When I dream!  

rm_uluv7 55F
1490 posts
8/31/2006 9:37 am

Last Read:
10/20/2009 6:47 pm

When I dream!

When I dream!

When the day falls
Times of disapparel of simplicity...
Skin and essence unveils, softness claims the instant...
When I settle down
Times of peacefulness of disassociation...
My hand prudent hesitates and strays with anticipation...
When I surrender
Time of arousal of provocations…
Senses enliven, mind concede, I succumb…
When the moment comes
Time of hunger and evasion...
When in my dream, licentious bodies intertwines with avidity...
When I dream, will I dream of you...

charmant_lion 58M

9/2/2006 5:53 am

Wow, Uluv, this is an awesome poem.
You have lots of talent and I can't wait to read more.
Keep on writing...


witchie_hour 61F
166 posts
10/26/2006 2:48 pm

Mmmm nice , I like it very much, you`re good !!

rm_uluv7 replies on 10/26/2006 3:53 pm:
Merci ma chère

rm_ptcruser392 53M

11/19/2006 12:26 pm

très bien Uluv
tu es très inspirée et inspirante
grosse bise

nounoudenfer 55F

1/21/2007 9:49 pm

très joli.

des étoiles dans les yeux des rêves plein la tête l'espoir au coeur

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