Going South............  

rm_texasmermaid 46F
1179 posts
11/15/2005 3:13 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Going South............

I started kissing your warm mouth,
then worked my way.. going south.
Across a meadow of soft chest hair,
to beyond and what awaits me there..
Your manhood stands, hard and strong,
and there my lips explore and roam..
My tongue is wet, my mouth is warm,
doing that for which their born.
I take your hardness between my lips,
quickly within, your manhood slips..
You groan as I begin to suck,
anticipating the coming fuck.
My body moves with a sensual motion,
swimming in the erotic ocean...
It won't be long, this I know..
as I feel your cock begin to grow.
Bigger, harder, with a throb,
pulsing as I lick the knob.
Knowing that before I am done,
you wil fill my throat with cum.

rm_DDMM1 47M

12/22/2005 4:52 pm

Erotic poetry. It's great!!!

Plano69 54M

12/14/2005 2:14 pm

ah... a poem is a wonderful thing...

rm_larry3163 66M

12/13/2005 8:21 am

Mer - Small world - Five minutes ago I joined your dirty old men group - If this is a preview, I'll enjoy being with you again -

rm_cal90245 57M

12/7/2005 10:08 pm

Gosh, mer....

All that testosterone you have stirred, I think my levels jumped a few dozen points.

rm_notbadwun1 59M

12/2/2005 7:23 am

Definitely a writer. I have read some of the others and will read them all eventually. Great imagery. It is not often a literary analyisis gives me an erection. Great work.
{=} Ed(NB1)

littleswede2 62M
9 posts
11/28/2005 9:55 am

mer you are just so hot. i can feel your lips as they bob up and down on my cock. with each bob you take a little more in. i feel the head of my cock pushing the back of your throat. the throbbing, the waves of pleasure as your tongue wraps around my cock, the uncontrolable bucking as i shot my hot cum down your throat. the ultimate feeling of please as you look up to me knowing that it is now my turn to return the pleasure . in full.

rm_texasmermaid 46F
738 posts
11/25/2005 1:05 pm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~SPLASHES and SPANKINGS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Love2BRiden 59M

11/19/2005 6:34 am

Mer - I will fly south to help you live out this fantasy. Great image - waiting to see the next round! As always, it will be exciting and fun.

bullseyetou 63M
175 posts
11/18/2005 5:04 am

very nice Mer.
I felt the words you wrote.


Dam - gummed up the keyboard

rm_Rich092285 64M
2 posts
11/17/2005 12:05 pm

WOW, that is HOT. Wish I had some kind of poetic gift. I would write a lymeric for you

Pussy_Lickker 59M
14 posts
11/17/2005 11:13 am

As I hold you close within my arms,
All I feel is the steady heartbeat of my chest.

slim_n_willing 49M
6 posts
11/16/2005 10:15 pm

Me next, please

rm_Ptalk1155 34M
3450 posts
11/16/2005 10:08 pm

Hehe, sorry to completely ignore the obvious eroticism of this post, but I have to wonder exactly how tinkerbell's sizeably enhanced cleavage would affect her ability to fly around. I'm sure Peter would never have ignored her for Wendy if she kept landing naked on his dick like that either.

Nice poem too.

divebuddy4cpls 49M
1 post
11/16/2005 2:56 pm

you sure baby like to suck,.and I appreciate that,.but we are far long distance,.maybe if we have the chance and meet in this small world then my dreams will come true...nice ability for writing too..you have lots of fantacies baby..

rm_stdmfn9 50M

11/16/2005 3:14 am

Thanks for a very sensual mind trip. You certainly made me respond.

rm_reisaree 42F
611 posts
11/16/2005 2:44 am

Well... I don't have the tool this one speaks of.. so ehh.. this one didn't do it for me.. LOL... Oh.. Its still good.. but didn't have the same effect the other one did! *winks*

WildAction5 54M

11/15/2005 10:07 pm

After I fill your throat with my spunk, I order you to lie down on my bunk. A beautiful female bod, legs spread wide ready to take my rod. Passion and heat make us both tremble, before the night time rumble. Anticipation makes your cunt hurt for my big cock but I am not ready for my dick and your pussy to interlock. No No, not yet I say. Let me lick and clit and suck your tits as I beg to continue our foreplay! As a tease your warm cunt with my playful tounge, I hear graceful moans keenly sung. The moment is now here as I carefully mount your pussy every so near. I kiss and caress you soft breasts, as my face buries itself in the soft tittie nest. Oh wow, the warm of your pussy meets the hardness of my throbing cock, and how! Up and down, side to side, my hard cock works with pride. When I finish our wild fuck, I realize my new found luck! HMMM

rm_72XLCHWG 47M

11/15/2005 9:09 pm

mer you have some very nice writing ability. i'd like to see if ur creativity carrys on elsewhere

upsidedown1955 61M
1 post
11/15/2005 3:35 pm

well, you have certainly got my attemtion and now i see hours of enjoyment for both

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