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Step into my sacred space.
I've reserved this spot for you.
Leave behind expectations and falsehoods.
This place is all about truth.
Don't be afraid to open up,
Reveal your truest face.
Then I'll give my warmest acceptance,
And we'll share an honest embrace.
Everyone is interconnected
In this vast universe.
We can find common ground.
We can build on trust.
Until the whole wide world is touching,
Quenching an undying thirst
For intimacy with each other,
Mutual acknowledgement of spiritual worth.
2/13/2006 1:33 pm
Shawn, this is just ....|
2/15/2006 4:41 am
From stardust we are made.|
2/15/2006 9:18 pm
I'll agree with J on it's a lovely poem.|
Have you looked to see if there are any poetry related groups here? Poetry can be so personal that it's difficult for many people to discuss it objectively.