just an old poem for a tuesday i am rushed, let me know what ya get from it if anything ...  

rm_rlandma 41M/40F
392 posts
6/20/2006 11:34 am

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6/22/2006 8:58 am

just an old poem for a tuesday i am rushed, let me know what ya get from it if anything ...


stars do lead men so easliy
to love
dancing sparks of emotion
that so mock the seriousness of dark
but they are above by
distances of futility
and never as
steadfast
loyal
as the ruinous morn;
trust them not for not is what they care of us

firestarter665 42M/39F

6/20/2006 3:57 pm

I am so not good with understanding poems. It sounds good though.


SirMounts 102M

6/21/2006 4:10 am

Very good, and welcome to blogging, rlandma. *smiling*


rm_rlandma 41M/40F
476 posts
6/22/2006 8:58 am

sweetheart, you never need to understand a poem, just to feel it. if you liked the way it sounded in your head as you read it, then that is what it was ment to do for you. *smiles*


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