concerning my story  

rm_lilbad14u 28F
10 posts
8/16/2005 7:39 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

concerning my story


i plan on writing more sometime hopefully soon i just need some inspiration

UdderPuttyBiped 37M
102 posts
8/17/2005 8:19 am

Where did you get the inspiration for what you wrote before? Was it related at all to a real life situation? Maybe part real part fantasy? What kind of fantasies do you have spinning around in your head right now?


rm_lilbad14u 28F

8/17/2005 6:56 pm

i was thinking of how it had been raining a lot and then it jst came to me.no it wasnt related to any real situation,right now i dont really have much mayb some handcuffs and other stuff in the next one ^^ not sure yet though


UdderPuttyBiped 37M
102 posts
8/18/2005 7:00 am

Hmmm. Sorry, I don't mean to ask too many questions, but I am curious...are your fantasies all girl-girl, or are there men involved in the mix as well? I liked the subject and the direction of the story, but I might suggest that when you write in the future you make use of paragraphs alot more. It was a bit hard to read because the formatting forced a person to read without pause from beginning to end or you'd lose your place in the story. That also gave it the side effect of seeming like it moved too fast. That being said, I do want to see more from you...and if you need any help with ideas, I might try to help.


rm_lilbad14u 28F

8/20/2005 10:30 pm

naw its np,no some men are involved, thanks,yeah sorry about that i'll use paragraphs more.... pretty good though for being my 1st story ever,^^ ok thanks


rm_humpty5278 38M

8/31/2005 4:46 pm

Damn, that story was great! I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!


rm_lilbad14u 28F

9/2/2005 6:37 pm

^^ thanks


ParksLoverTared 38M
19 posts
12/16/2005 4:39 pm

Very nice. Can I be in your next story?


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