FANTASY a poem for you  

rm_hotmamaNcols 39F
460 posts
3/29/2006 8:59 am

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5/26/2006 7:18 pm

FANTASY a poem for you


For fantasy in Blogsville, I've been there too.

Time stood still
As you walked away
Your bright radiance disappeared
And I stood in endless darkness
I lie in tremendous grief
Falling into emptiness
Alone and completely defeated
Haunted by your enchanting smile
Shattered and helplessly broken
I struggle to pick up the pieces in your wake.
I am all but swept away
By your relentless undertow
Into the deepest chasm
Of a sea filled with my tears.


wantonwill 60M

3/29/2006 12:17 pm

Wow;

this has echoes of a situation in which I am currently involved...you have touched me with this poem!


rm_hotmamaNcols replies on 3/29/2006 7:44 pm:
Unfortunately with this great memory of mine, I also remember emotions extremely well and in graphic detail. It's a benefit because it makes me a better writer/communicator, and it's a penalty because I remember too much, it holds me back.

fantasylover_05 62M

3/29/2006 1:15 pm

I am speechless!!

I am touched so very very deeply!

I am indeed "haunted by her enchanting smile"

The sound of her voice echos in my head

You have put words to my thoughts and feelings... so eloquently

THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!!


rm_hotmamaNcols replies on 3/29/2006 7:51 pm:
I deleted a verse after "haunted by your enchanted smile"
the verse was "tormented by your voice"

fantasylover_05 62M

3/29/2006 5:56 pm

I have been back and read this several times.....

I can't begin to tell you how you have affected me... I am so deeply touched that you would be so kind as to do this for me... and for you to be able to express my feelings sooo well!!

Thank you so much... I will be forever grateful


rm_hotmamaNcols replies on 3/29/2006 7:57 pm:
When I read your post "lost loves", I read it in its entirety. You inspired me, I just read in between the lines. Feel free to copy it, send it to her, don't send it to her. This is for you.

On a lighter note:
When does the TRIAL begin?

fantasylover_05 62M

3/30/2006 5:08 am

Dearest Hotmama

Apparently you read between the lines WELL!! You absolutely nailed it!

I watched a movie this past weekend... and one of the lead characters looked and sounded sooooo much like her it could almost have been her twin.... and her voice was EXACTLY the same... and so that is also why I said her voice...... I sat there and watched that movie struggling to keep my composure...........

I will love her forever!!


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