.... ebb and flow .... motion... or emotion ....  

rm_gatttorbait 57M
1033 posts
7/19/2006 6:46 am

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.... ebb and flow .... motion... or emotion ....

... I sat on the beach ... watching the waves crashing gently on the shore...

... as the moon rose.... the water slowly reached my feet ... giving me the sensation that I was drifting towards the black ink ....

.... the rush of cool water inching up my legs... to the very passage with which I needed to breath ...

.... I wasn't moving toward the water... it was moving to me.... as if beckoning me to remain... and test my strength against her... I succumbed .... moving back to safety ... knowing I needed air...

... for a time I thought of all the things in life that do the same thing... and I wondered how nature could know of these things...

... then it hit me... I am human ... I am nature ... I am vulnerable .... I am me ... my life is moving ... I am still ... until I need to breath ...

... how sad the need to breath ... for I would rather be swallowed by love .....


rm_verriberri 78F
1849 posts
7/19/2006 9:34 pm

Interesting shift in style Gattor..... like the image of being very still and quiet and letting it come to us... and wash over us; not convinced I want to drown in it though..... just feel it all around me, and notice the edges. Keep sitting on that beach gattor, I think good things are happening. *s* -v


rm_gatttorbait 57M
444 posts
7/20/2006 8:11 am

    Quoting rm_verriberri:
    Interesting shift in style Gattor..... like the image of being very still and quiet and letting it come to us... and wash over us; not convinced I want to drown in it though..... just feel it all around me, and notice the edges. Keep sitting on that beach gattor, I think good things are happening. *s* -v
... ahh Verri... this was a shift for me... but only because it's the first time I have put these thoughts in writing ...

... you see... I never realised how many times these thoughts have run through me... perhaps this is my way of marking time... *smiles* ...

... it's funny... I think things.... and next thing I know you are writing threads about them ... are you in my head? .... lol


__poet__ 45M
3583 posts
7/20/2006 9:01 am

holy shit gatttor...

keep writing my man...

damn

"There are no shortcuts to life's greatest achievements; therefore we take these risks not to escape life but to prevent life from escaping us!"poet
Come visit my little corner to hide...


rm_gatttorbait 57M
444 posts
7/20/2006 10:22 am

    Quoting __poet__:
    holy shit gatttor...

    keep writing my man...

    damn
... lol ... I will Poet ... I will .... *nodding*

... and thanks for taking time to stop by ... *smiles*


rm_verriberri 78F
1849 posts
7/21/2006 6:03 pm

    Quoting rm_gatttorbait:
    ... ahh Verri... this was a shift for me... but only because it's the first time I have put these thoughts in writing ...

    ... you see... I never realised how many times these thoughts have run through me... perhaps this is my way of marking time... *smiles* ...

    ... it's funny... I think things.... and next thing I know you are writing threads about them ... are you in my head? .... lol
I like this view inside the humorous gattor... *s*.. sometimes I feel like I can read luv's mind... maybe it's all that 'intimacy' you two have been sharing that's helping with the mind-meld... *smirk*... that, or maybe it's just thoughtful people of a certain age bumping into similar insights. Keep writin' Gattor... I'm learning all sorts of interesting things about you. -v


rm_gatttorbait 57M
444 posts
7/23/2006 12:09 pm

    Quoting rm_verriberri:
    I like this view inside the humorous gattor... *s*.. sometimes I feel like I can read luv's mind... maybe it's all that 'intimacy' you two have been sharing that's helping with the mind-meld... *smirk*... that, or maybe it's just thoughtful people of a certain age bumping into similar insights. Keep writin' Gattor... I'm learning all sorts of interesting things about you. -v
... Verri... I'm not sure I want you to learn all about me.... hehe ... I gotta save some for others you know.... *nodding*

... btw... I don't know if I've told you... but you are a very special woman... *smiles*


blake01234 50M
1 post
11/5/2006 1:33 pm

you must be a beautiful person inside & out to write with such warm & enthusiam. Good luck
Blake
French Lick, Indiana


rm_gatttorbait 57M
444 posts
12/19/2006 1:15 pm

    Quoting blake01234:
    you must be a beautiful person inside & out to write with such warm & enthusiam. Good luck
    Blake
    French Lick, Indiana
... thanks for the compliment Blake... and good luck to you in your adventures as well...


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