rm_funinic 48M
562 posts
5/8/2006 3:33 am

Last Read:
6/11/2006 12:13 pm


Watching the waves shimmering in the fading light of the sunset, we can't tell where the sky ends and the water begins. Our first day, our first night, our first sunset of this perfect escape from the mechanics of life at work, at home.

The sand is still soothing, radiating the sun's warmth back into us, even as night falls and we watch other couples walk back to the hotel. The moon is already up, drowning out the fainter stars, casting our silhouettes on the sand as faint echoes of the day's shadows.

I see your smile, watch you stand and walk into the waves, shedding your bathing suit, dropping it in the sand as you leave behind your worries, reject society's limits, give yourself to the water.

You dive into a wave, and I join you. I catch you as you surface gasping for air, and find your mouth in a breathless kiss. You wrap yourself around me, feeling only the power of the waves and my warm embrace, the circles of the water's motion rocking us.

The warm water, the touch of your skin, the warmer caress of your lips sliding over the top of me, tasting the water on your neck, I feel myself moving more and more in opposition to you. I tease you, touching your most sensitive skin with mine, feeling your arms pull me tighter.

The perfect wave arrives, lifting you, then me, as you fall into its wake. The caress of the water as it cascades down your shoulders, flows between us, teases your breasts as it passes, can't distract you. The wave's consequence, its effect on our embrace, as you fall onto me, pulling yourself onto me with arms and legs, is repeated by the next wave, and the next.

You begin to let go, allowing the power of the waves and the thrust of my legs against the sand satisfy your desire. Finally, you're floating, barely touching me, my hands caressing your sides, breasts, hips, thighs, as you're driven onto me by the water's motion.

I feel your legs begin to tremble, graspng me, pulling me deeper into you. As you come, I see your hair fan out, the waves giving you a moving halo in time to our motion and the waves sweeping your body.

to be continued...

_RoSe_ 47F
994 posts
5/8/2006 4:23 am

Hmmm what a painting you have created. Lovers on the sea shore. Definately worth the wait. I am impressed and aroused...well done my friend from far away. Desire you have built...a fire you have kindled...

"A life without passion is not a life; it is merely an existence."

rm_funinic 48M
823 posts
5/8/2006 5:56 am

Thank you for the kind words... I was in a different mood last night/this morning, wasn't sure if it would turn out well. I'm very happy you like it!

Whispersoftly5 52F
15176 posts
5/10/2006 7:52 am

Your writing is incredible. Very lovely and erotic. I can't wait for more!


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

5/11/2006 4:15 pm

Never stop writing ... it is magic !


rm_funinic 48M
823 posts
5/11/2006 5:29 pm

    Quoting __Huntress__:
    Never stop writing ... it is magic !

I was hoping you'd have the time... Your life's been pretty busy lately.

Thank you!!!

You've gotten under my Skin...

runzwithknives 59F

5/13/2006 12:43 pm

Just beautiful. And ever so erotic. Keep it up.


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