What the hell comes next  

rm_firehot2003 56M
2111 posts
1/16/2006 6:31 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

What the hell comes next

Why do you torture me so

I have a heart you know

And feelings that run deep

Why the need to put me down

Can i really not do right

Why the need to control my head

I have a brain i can think

I am a man i have feelings you know

I do not have a heart of stone

But a heart that has feelings

Do you wonder why my shoulders slump

Do you care that i cry

My head my heart is broke

I've known joy, sadness and happiness

And now despair

What the hell comes next

That was an attempt by me at poetry. Its a long time since i 've attempted a poem 25 years i'd say. looking at them now they are a collection of sad thoughts and feelings i'm feeling at the moment rather than poetry
Love you all


Sulabula 45F
12658 posts
1/16/2006 11:50 am

that was lovely....

I can't write poetry...no matter how i try

Sula xxx

Sula xxx

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papyrina 51F
21133 posts
1/16/2006 1:04 pm

i'm terrible at peotry,even reading it i mess up lol

But on this post while not being very poetic it showed very well how you are feeling,hugs sweetie

I'm a

i'm here to stay

silkysmoothlegs3 105F

1/16/2006 7:03 pm

that was brillinat babes
silky xxx

papyrina 51F
21133 posts
1/17/2006 4:24 am

papyrina missing in action

I'm a

i'm here to stay

hugs_4_u2 39F

1/17/2006 7:15 am

agh fire hugs from hugs nice to c a man who can express his feelings in such a way!

love hugs xxx

rm_SusieQ27 46F
2093 posts
1/24/2006 8:41 pm

Fire, first things first..I hope this is on page one..lol..now then, what a lovely poem..it evokes such emotion..Now then.. the next one has to be more cheeerful, you hear,dear?

Luv n stuff Susie

rm_SusieQ27 46F
2093 posts
1/24/2006 8:44 pm

Fire, there, that's better...I bet this ends up on the second page now..lol

Luv n stuff Susie..
P.S. remember, the happy poem..tomorrow, perhaps?

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