Love Requiem  

rm_dragonheat23 51M
977 posts
6/28/2006 8:12 am

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8/10/2006 5:59 am

Love Requiem

There is a place deep in my soul
Where I’d cherish a picture of us
Of late that image is blurred
Bloodstained by this mistrust

We used to laugh
We used to cry
Now we exist
I wonder why

I’d place the blame here
Somewhere between our heart and head
But in the end, a futile venture
Dead, my love, is dead

So I stand here alone in your field of dreams
Bare chested and encircled by thistle
You are the one who ordained this
My notice of dismissal

Do what you will, I just don’t care
Confronted by this sudden epiphany
I had seen the grandeur of love
Now I feel the grip of apathy

HBowt2 58F

6/28/2006 8:51 am

Sad when its over.....hugs....take care of you...HB2xx

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:46 pm:
Thank you for the hugs. Taking all I can get right now

Notfunanymore 105F
10289 posts
6/28/2006 11:11 am

Come here baby. I'll make you feel better......

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:49 pm:
Promises, promises
You know, somehow, I think you could.


6/28/2006 11:44 am

Hugs and everyday will get better. Very beautifully put! Kisses {=}

just a squirrel trying to get a nut

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:50 pm:
Thank you. It's good to know I have friends who care

pet_humility 48F

6/28/2006 1:26 pm

I wish I could just make you close your eyes and feel a tender touch... sighs with you.
Kisses your lips, and whispers it will be ok, you'll see

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:51 pm:
I can almost feel your touch.
Thanks for the kiss, I love kisses

ArtisticTwist75 41F
2505 posts
6/28/2006 2:55 pm

Apathy drains your creativity Dragon. Can't you write or paint it out... I pray you feel it rather than mask it. Monster Hugs


rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:54 pm:
I feel the apathy toward her and the situation, not the best way, but it works for now.
I still hold my passion for life and living and intend to keep doing it as strongly as I can.

southrnpeach333 50F

6/28/2006 3:08 pm

beautiful expression of your ending. i am sorry for you pain. just one more painful turnstyle in the journey. it is never easy but so worth the ride.

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:55 pm:
Another bump in the road I guess, but the journey continues unabated

moonfire2u 69F
2602 posts
6/28/2006 4:02 pm

I feel so bad for you...endings are never easy but sometimes necessary for new beginnings...soft kisses and strong wishes are sent your way...

kind thoughts,

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:55 pm:
Then we shall share a toast to new beginings. (Insert clinking of glasses here)

534 posts
6/29/2006 7:18 am

Ahh deep...I feel your pain...and the pain that "I" have created in my life...I wish I could give you a big hug right now..."cuz I need one myself"...Take care ~Daisy~

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/29/2006 12:58 pm:
Have your hugs and send you some in return. Burdens shared are burdens lessened. Take care also.

moonlightphoenix 45F
6508 posts
7/6/2006 11:19 am

Wow. Really wow. Painfully beautiful and excellent turn of phrase. Well done.

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 7/6/2006 1:38 pm:
Thank you. And Thanks for stopping by

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