Goodbye  

rm_dragonheat23 51M
977 posts
3/10/2006 7:17 am

Last Read:
5/30/2006 8:13 am

Goodbye

I give to you a faded flower
In this, our love’s final hour
Never haves and never beens
A new chapter now begins
Venom in your soul, poison in your heart
A loathsome expert in the deception art
Your pumping veins ooze out your sickness
Destroy my faith with feverish quickness
Like a bedazzled moth drawn to your light
I spiral down to suicidal flight
Left on the tile like shattered glass
Bloodstained transcript of our requiem mass
So you can keep your discreet indiscretions
I’ll no longer be your tortured possession


pet_humility 48F

3/10/2006 8:57 am

Very nice!

But would still like to torture a wee bit


rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
3/10/2006 9:56 am

For you Pet, I would endure the torture. But to be fair, you would have to get some too. But I promise you'll like it.


rm_saintlianna 45F
15466 posts
3/10/2006 1:27 pm

I love that and I love the pic too.


moonfire2u 69F
2602 posts
3/10/2006 4:16 pm

Wonderful and dark...with a happy ending?

kind thoughts,
Moonfire


TheBtchIsHere122 44F
63 posts
3/10/2006 10:53 pm

Again, you amaze me


rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
3/13/2006 10:18 am

Saintlianna, Thank you, I wanted a picture that expressed what I was feeling too
Moonfire, the ending is still unwritten
BtchIsHere, Thank you, unfortunately my muse has me writing cheerless poetry again
Mzhunyhole, I appreciate that
DanielGR, The picture is by Geiger, the guy who designed the monster in Alien


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