For someone I haven't met  

rm_dragonheat23 51M
977 posts
1/20/2006 9:55 am

Last Read:
5/30/2006 6:51 am

For someone I haven't met


A spark comes coiling to the edge of sleep
From realms arcane which have become unknown
And from this psychic well does beauty leap
A vision cherished for to call my own.
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This wispy strand now takes it's shape in fire
And fueled by sources boldly to enchant
Then forming curves from wish of heart's desire
A Woman's eyes all graced with Elvish slant.
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The shield maid's arms then reach and wanting clasp
We intertwine within her streaming hair
Then sighing voices send a heartfelt gasp
As fragrance heralds tawny skin now bare'd.
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This honored Lady may in shadows walk
But fate may someday find my heart unlock.

angelwoarose 41F

1/20/2006 2:39 pm

absolutely beautiful


SweetAlissaXoXo 37F

1/20/2006 11:04 pm

I really loved it!!!!


HOTNBOTHERED0414 46F

1/20/2006 11:13 pm

I really liked that. You can feel the feelings put into it. You write so well. Makes me jealous....


rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
1/21/2006 6:49 am

Angelwoarose I thank you for the compliment. Much of what I write winds up in the garbage. I don't think that others will like it. I'm glad you did.


rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
1/21/2006 6:53 am

H-N-B, You have no need to be jealous. I have read what you have written. It is also from the heart and full of feeling. There is much beauty in you, I am glad you share it.


moonfire2u 69F
2602 posts
1/23/2006 4:11 pm

You are a gentle soul...thanks for sharing in such a beautiful way.

kind thoughts,
Moonfire


rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
1/24/2006 4:15 pm

Moonfire, I hope for and seek beauty even when I find ugliness. I believe that what you are inside shines. When the muse seizes me, I write what I feel. Somtimes it is not pretty, but it is always from the heart.


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