For someone I haven't met  

rm_dragonheat23 51M
977 posts
1/20/2006 9:55 am

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5/30/2006 6:51 am

For someone I haven't met

A spark comes coiling to the edge of sleep
From realms arcane which have become unknown
And from this psychic well does beauty leap
A vision cherished for to call my own.
This wispy strand now takes it's shape in fire
And fueled by sources boldly to enchant
Then forming curves from wish of heart's desire
A Woman's eyes all graced with Elvish slant.
The shield maid's arms then reach and wanting clasp
We intertwine within her streaming hair
Then sighing voices send a heartfelt gasp
As fragrance heralds tawny skin now bare'd.
This honored Lady may in shadows walk
But fate may someday find my heart unlock.

angelwoarose 41F

1/20/2006 2:39 pm

absolutely beautiful

SweetAlissaXoXo 37F

1/20/2006 11:04 pm

I really loved it!!!!


1/20/2006 11:13 pm

I really liked that. You can feel the feelings put into it. You write so well. Makes me jealous....

rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
1/21/2006 6:49 am

Angelwoarose I thank you for the compliment. Much of what I write winds up in the garbage. I don't think that others will like it. I'm glad you did.

rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
1/21/2006 6:53 am

H-N-B, You have no need to be jealous. I have read what you have written. It is also from the heart and full of feeling. There is much beauty in you, I am glad you share it.

moonfire2u 69F
2602 posts
1/23/2006 4:11 pm

You are a gentle soul...thanks for sharing in such a beautiful way.

kind thoughts,

rm_dragonheat23 51M
1158 posts
1/24/2006 4:15 pm

Moonfire, I hope for and seek beauty even when I find ugliness. I believe that what you are inside shines. When the muse seizes me, I write what I feel. Somtimes it is not pretty, but it is always from the heart.

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